Reviews for Hurts Like Cavities
Guest69 chapter 2 . 6/15
Another masterpiece. A story that weaves romance and comedy so intricately well, you can't help but gush and chuckle at the same time. This was adorable as hell. Thanks for the read.
SaintMichael95 chapter 2 . 6/7
I was really really hoping that it would turn out to be a sham. That Jaune and Ruby were just pranking everyone, though I guess I wasn't disappointed with the outcome either.
deoxeyses chapter 2 . 4/6
Fun read
Sophisticated Sage chapter 2 . 3/8
Oh my gosh, this was the sweetest thing I have ever read! I was smiling the entire time! :D
Raj8 chapter 2 . 2/1
Have to admit that was pretty amusing, seeing team RWBY trying to split them up was a bit much, but I do have to admit that it's funny to see them acting like such a love sick couple.
kreshryl chapter 2 . 1/14
Hilarious. I loved it. 1st chapter physically hurt me to read... Too much cringe XD
Stickginge chapter 2 . 12/18/2019
My god that was too good. Had a smile on my face the entire time reading.
Such a funny story. Great work
Mistletainn chapter 2 . 12/17/2019
That was it?! Aww...
Oh well, if the fic continue, it could became stale if the existing pattern just repeated over and over. OTOH, breaking the pattern would make things less funny. So perhaps it being a two shots is for the best...

Thanks for your excellent work!
Silvervoalt chapter 2 . 12/11/2019
I need to see more of this
HalloweenJackal0w0 chapter 2 . 11/25/2019
Please continue on with the story it is absolutely hilarious with how funny and sweet it is
TheSinfulKing chapter 2 . 11/22/2019
I highly enjoyed this two-shot Lancaster story! It was funny to see the group try to break them up to just outright fail and get them closer!

I would love to see a Yang reaction to what Blake caused from trying to break them up, it would hilarious.
Mr. Honest chapter 2 . 11/10/2019
Really fun read! Keep up the good work!
A Fan chapter 2 . 11/10/2019
And Blake was never seen again. Until 20 years later, when landscapers found a cat faunus skeleton buried in the courtyard during a remodeling.
Fyr RedNight chapter 2 . 11/7/2019
I absolutely loved this two-shot!

Your way of writing them as couple was funny and sweet.

According to the last line, is a sequel in the plans?
Weird Crack Shipper chapter 2 . 11/5/2019
Jaune and Ruby don’t act or talk like Jaune and Ruby. But I’m glad it worked out in the end.
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