This story is pretty much a walkthrough with two new names. What is suppose to be exciting? I'm confused.

I definitely would NOT put my life into Mark's hands.

Too stylish? TOO STYLISH? THAT'S THE KIND OF THING THAT WILL GET YOU F'EKD IF THE GRID GOES DOWN or we get invaded whatever! He would get yelled at by his drill sergeant if he ever said that to his face and he'd cause the whole camp to do manual labor and any number of punishments for putting his team at risk.

I am SO glad that he isn't protecting the lives of our troops. Thank God.

Good four chapters

Excellent