| Reviews for All Hail The Lord Warden: Volume 1 |
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  Conman chapter 2 . 9/17 I would make the revenge system and feats the magic of the world and if you are gonna make him just as brutal as they are in the game be sure to try and draw attention to it as the others should be shocked by it |
 DragonTetho chapter 2 . 7/31 I am absolutely interested can't wait for more. Since Heathmoor is the only surviving magical society would Jaune be able to use magic in conjuction with the Warden class ability? |
| The Reading Dragon 666 chapter 2 . 7/30 Interesting |
| theawsomest5 chapter 2 . 7/30 I’m down to find out where this story goes! |
| DivineWhiskey chapter 2 . 7/29 I can’t wait for the future arguments of how Brutal people from Eir are. The lack of Grimm only make them more brutal. It would be interesting if Team NPR and RWBY meet Jaune after they see him do a very brutal warden execution. |
| NineYetis chapter 2 . 7/29 Much better introduction. Good job. The realization of where Jaune was could have been handled better. Mabey a chapter or two of chapter interaction then reveal? Not trying to criticize but provide useful feedback. What you got is good so no sense stressing. |
| The Teletrap chapter 1 . 7/29 The land in which For Honor takes place is known as Heathmoore BTW. Interesting new start though. |
| MidKnightMoonglow99 chapter 2 . 7/29 Interesting. Here’s hoping that it stays interesting. In other words: Get creative with the application of the lore and history of this new world Jaune finds himself within, in a new and respectful way. The same goes for it’s characters, already established or original. Hopefully they’ll all be fleshed out. Anyways, best of luck. Till next. |
| 246vili chapter 2 . 7/29 Well made chapter. I can't exactly recall what was the reason behind the barrier (I think it was Ozma himself raising it for some reason), but I'm sure that this version explained the barrier's origin and purpose better than the previous one in my opinion. Looking forward to see where will you take this story. And I see in here Pyrrha was the one who ratted out Jaune and not Cardin for a change. I can only imagine the strain this will put on their relationship when the reunite. Keep up the good work and stay healthy. |
| Hawkeyes100 chapter 1 . 7/11 Shit I'm hooked, please update this we need more. |
| RoseLion90 chapter 1 . 6/11 place update this story everyone wants to read this it really good so make more for us or yourself we like this story |
| Rathaloski Mozsko chapter 1 . 5/16 pls update |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/16 can we expect the Wu-Lin faction in this story? |
| EliteQuad chapter 1 . 1/18 Nice work! Would love to see more, but I know how it is, with being overworked and all that! If you ever get the chance, I'd love to see it! |
| Conman70215 chapter 1 . 1/9 When can we expect an update? |
