I'm beginning to think you dont write anything that is less then amazing. I'll be following this story hoping that you so come back to it. I like what you have done with the characters and how you enabled their growth.

This fic was absolutely fantastic. Your talent for writing is truly exceptional. You did an amazing job of weaving your own story while still keeping our favorite characters from becoming OCs. I particularly like what you did with Carina in this story. While I have no problems with the Morgan/Alex pairing, I def enjoyed how you got the Bearded One to realize Carina could also be a "Real Girl". As for Chuck and Sarah...the romance and chemistry between them showed through every chapter. Overall this fic has been an absolute blast to read and I thank you for taking the time to write this wonderful fic for the rest of us. Great job!

Beautiful story. Absolutely love it. Thank you for sharing this with us

Not bad. not bad at all, thanks

I really liked the conversation with Irene. I think Irene would fit in well with this crew, if she could escape her job. Also loved the line about how Chuck could make a Prius sexy, even a spoiled Prius. :)

Thank you for the last chapter. I always like it when the stories are wrapped up nicely. I also enjoy the unique group dynamic that this group has.

A lovely final conversation that filled me with warm fuzzies and a smile. :)

I really liked the lyrics to your song! You're the first fanfic writer I've seen compose an original song to go with their fic. Chuck wrapping her in a blanket was perfect. Them resting together was perfect. Chuck's easy kiss as he left to pick up pastries was perfect. And despite not being done with this story yet, I must—(pout!)—go to bed, since it is long past my bedtime and I must be up before dawn tomorrow. Thanks for a lovely evening!

The vision of Sarah leaping down from a loft and landing on Abagor was gloriousl then bludgeoning him into unconsciousness, was very satisfying. Thanks for the very compelling Carina backstory.

So many great moments in this. This Sarah is genuinely threatening. Great tension!

OMG *ALL* the feels! You almost had tears welling up in my eyes when I pictured little Sarah crying alone on the hotel bed, surrounded by Twinkie wrappers, and then you just kept twisting and twisting...

Great reveal of Chuck seeing the knife sheath, but I'm pissed at him for not letting Sarah talk. And I can completely understand his reaction.

GREAT writing.

Classic romance eavesdropping twist, and then... Carina and Ellie? There's a pairing we never got in canon, but I look forward to it!

Ellie's double entendres keep making me chuckle. Yay, Sarah's finally starting to come around!

I loved this sentence:"Sarah listened to herself instead, even though she had to strain to hear her own voice."

Ooh, nice job making Jackie' too-coincidental appearances not be the work of a hack romcom writer, but actually a sign of something potentially much more sinister.

You're so good at twisting me into feeling knots! Great conversations, and I liked Chuck's reaction to Sarah's Farm-response. Jackie's appearance is a bit of a coincidence, but I really look forward to Jackie befriending or being kind to Sarah in some way. It would be so great if this didn't turn into the usual sort of love triangle, but into an unexpected and oh-so-much-better story where women support each other and go deeper together as they struggle through their thoughts and feelings. I really like how you're deepening Carina, and giving her and Sarah interesting things to wrestle with.