oh my god such scary thoughts

Amazing story. Can't wait to read part II.
You are a very talented writer.

I have loved this story so much. I cant wait to start part two.

Whew...
Excellent writing.
Part-2 is up...starting it now.

Wow another excellent story! Can’t wait to read part 2!

Me encanta la historia! Me voy a leer lasegunda parte

WOW! Talk about leaving somebody hanging...

update please want to read more

Fantástica la historia. A veces un poco con demasiado los ataques a Ana y tantas heridas, peto igual me encanta.
Es triste que en muchas historias o en la mayoría de los que he leído, y son muchos, los padres de Ana son los que o están fuera de escena o son los malos o pobres o como aquí Ray es un tonto intimidado y Carla ni muy lejos de quién fue con Ana aún nivel cruel y despiadado aquí. Creo que es la que está detrás de todo la intriga y daños a Ana y G. Creo q Ray fue un personaje fuerte y protector de Ana siempre y muy importante para Ana y quién fue ella en la vida. Por otro lado, la familia Grey siempre fue la que se mantiene presente. Pero, espero que Ray logré reinvindicar sus acciones en adelante.
El equipo de CPO clásico es otro de los favoritos. En un momento estuvieron todos y Sawyer el principal con Ana cuando la pela a Ian, sin embargo después desapareció de escenas y ya no lo volviste a mencionar, aunque están Ryan y Reynolds no volví a ver a mi amado Sawyer. Espero esté en la próxima parte. A leer ver qué lo que sucedió con Ana. Gracias por escribir tan bien y compartirlo.

I have so much to say but I will just move to part ll. And I have so much stories of yours to catch up because before I wasn’t signed to fanfic I used the same name but not signed.

OMG! How could you possibly do this to us! waiting impostor chapter 2!

Love your stories soooooo much. And this one is no exception. Love how the Mister is available to us while we're waiting for Part II...lol. But, I didn't find this one until II was already done!-lucky me! So I have both to read. Love it! Your stories are the best. On to part II so I can meet the new arrival!;);)

Dear blue sky, you’re killing me here. Please when can we expect Part II? I loved this story so much. Now I’m anxious for the next part. You can e-mail me at Just one more thing, you have the ability to keep readers from becoming bored. I was completely riveted with this storyline. Please let us know when Part II is up. Thank you.

Thank you for sharing this story with us! Some people may disagree but I love that it's only one loooooong chapter. Often, at night, I can't sleep so I listen to stories with headphones of course so as not to disturb my sleeping husband me. I don't have to constantly turn the power on my iPad to turn the page for the next chapter...

Your stories are great because they have a detail but not too many that you lose interest and enough back and forth on the timeline but not too many to get confused. Your FSOG characters are similar yet different and in a good . I'm so glad that I waited to read your stories so that I can on to the next one and I love that your stories are already finished! Can't wait for the next installment...

Love this! It's so well written. I just wish you'd spell out "especially" and "though."