I feel mildly horrible for laughing but sksskks she said she don't wanna be burnt crisps

even if he had still said no, I would've made damn sure I wasn't anywhere near the house

excellent chapter

Oh boy! Is Will going to have to comfort Leia now. That's a lot to do but she's drunk enough anyway to relax right? I'm glad you're back the chapter was awesome as usual. People on the spectrum don't really care for parties so of course it was little overwhelming for Will and especially if new "friend" just blew up the Death Star! lol Hopefully Will isn't too hung over to miss the medal ceremonies the next day but she has to know her limits right. If you ever got my messages it would be interesting if Will had her own troubled flashbacks of her time on earth and when Luke eventually fights Darth Vader on cloud city she might be separated from him but then remember how her father didn't get her either and left her. So maybe her and Luke have a lot more in common than she realizes! But of course those feelings will be overwhelming. As far as Will and Luke's relationship goes maybe have Will realize she has feelings for him but once again doesn't know what to do so she pushes him away but then after Luke's first fight with Vader and him almost dying she realizes she can't hide them any more when she confesses eventually he says he always felt that way about her. Maybe that's too cheesy I don't know can't wait for the next update.

Okay, I LOVED this chapter so much and I can tell I’m gonna like the next one too! The writing was beautiful! And it was amazing to read! Keep up the good work!

Wow, this is a really neat story so far. Keep up the good work!

excellent chapter

That was great lets not have Will or Luke get THAT drunk if you know what I mean cause when you're drunk you don't make the best choices! But I'm glad we didn't spend too much time on the Battle of Yavin and I'm glad Will was able to comfort an injured pilot during it maybe she herself has an injured arm. I betcha Han and Chewie wanted to see if they could get the weird farm boy and even weirder off worlder girl drunk those bastards. Anyway another great chapter can't wait for more and Happy Anniversary of the Empire Strikes Back!

New writer here! I am loving this story! Will is such an interesting character, probably because she isn’t the stereotype of coragious talented heroine. She is a girl that ended up in a strange planet with strange people and her reactions are believable considering the circumstances. Luke, as always is a cute boy and in the future a badass Jedi. Han is as always... Han and he is perfect that way. And Leia, I am curious if her and Will’s personalities will crash. Leia is a willfull woman and Will is shy, maybe leia will try to get her out of her shell, especially if she really joins the rebellion. And I can already tell that Chewie likes Will and his moment with her before the battle was so CUTE!
I have some questions too... Will will try to reveal something in the future? What will happen in the time between the first and second movie? When will Luke start seeing Will as more than a friend? Does Ben know more about Will now that he is a force ghost?
And one request: can you please mention Luke and Leia’s mom? One of my only problem with the original trilogy is that nobody asks who the mother is after the revelation of Vader to Luke. I would be like: “Who in the whole universe would have the child of a mass murderer?”

Will and Luke are beginning to become closer. I couldn't help but 'aw' when Luke wanted a kiss from her too. Haha. I wonder if Leia is unsure if she wants to flirt with Luke or not, because of Will. I want her and Will to become good friends, but maybe Leia kissing Luke (even if it's gross) is what Will needs to see that she has developed her own feelings. I can't see another girl kissing Luke, maybe that Mara Jade girl if you wanted to bring her into it. She's from the comics and is officially-unofficial Luke's wife (wasn't a big fan of her, felt like she was just fanservice and just a Sarah Jane ripoff). Anyway! I really love this! I wonder if Luke has feelings for her and is aware of them! I think it would be cute if Will realizes she has feelings but isn't sure what to do with them while Luke peruses her. Will pulls away because of earth, and Luke gets angry because he loves her, and doesn't understand why she doesn't want to be with him - he knows she loves him too! Ahhh i cannot wait! update soon please!

nicely done

Awwe! Will and Luke's relationship is pretty cute! Now Will would probably have to listen to the Battle of Yavin over the radio or whatever and I can only imagine how she'll feel knowing what happens but still feel the tension and not seeing it. It would be cool if you posted again on May 4th Star Wars Day but no pressure. Great Chapter overall

Terrific story- Needed to be written! (and well written)

excellent chapter

Nice!

Poor Will! That was her first big battle now that you think about it. It was loud, bright, and now she's injured. I figured she had Asperger Syndrome and its also hard when you're in a galaxy where no one has ever heard of that term! However she should still let someone help her with injured arm no matter how uncomfortable it might be. At least Luke could convince Leia to be more sensitive to Will's sensitivities. Of course Han wouldn't be at least not at first but maybe over time IDK. I wonder if Will will have to come face to face with Darth Vader herself though I don't think she should be a part of Vader and Luke's duel on Cloud City since that's a personal thing. It's great chapter overall!