I love me some angst.
Your story is great, I love your writing style! I'm excited to see where this leads.

You are kind of rushing the romance

Beautiful writing, I'm so excited to see the next chapter!

Sua perspectiva da história é linda! Parabéns!

With upcoming 2d part this Is like a good inter before whatever thing they are gonna face

Please, continue writing this. I’m very sure that there are many others who want to enjoy more of your writing in this wonderfully set up plot. Personally, I am looking forward to more.