sorry I'm new and I still don't know how the comments work on the site so you could read the message in chapter 37 your Dani

Hello Ashlie
my name is LadyBlaziken or Dani of course it is not my real name but to abbreviate I prefer to be called that, I am a new writer since only today I published my first story is in Italian so I do not know if many will understand it and I feel a little nervous I am afraid I have not done my job very well and I would like to have some advice from you since your story is my favorite

This story is amazing I hope you’re well and are still working on this amazing story️

Wicked! Is there another chapter for this story?

Implication on what to expect in the following fics after this?

Ooh, a plan fiendishly clever and compelling in its intrigue, I like it. This is gonna be good, I can tell. As soon as this fic is done, I look forward to the Silverwing fanfic that occurs after this. I'm curious to what you have in mind. ()ｂ

Ha ha haaa another chapter commences love it please feed us more great work n thank you again daddy aka is gonna be cama zotz

Wow that nightmare was something. I mean yikes. I wonder who big brother is too. Keep up the excellent work sis. :D

Wicked! Is there another chapter for this story?

Oh geez poor Ashlie! That really had to hurt. Oh Remix is gonna get what's coming to him in the end. Stupid abusive jerk. I always liked Romulus better.

No it's alright, don't wanna bring it up but we're all a little antsy and suffering cabin fever...what's worse in our homeland no thanks to more than one idiot getting drunk off their tails not caring about the emergency, instead of the quarentine being 2 weeks at frist, then 4 weeks, now it's 6 weeks to all of our chagrin.

Until then I'm trying to get inspired without losing my touch or getting restless...But anywho we're enjoying a good fic in this time of concern. And the addtional scene near the end is creative. Hopefully I'll get a spark of artistry, our folks agree if we're going to be stuck inside might as well get imaginative especially in the kitchen. ;)

Wicked! Is there another chapter for this story?

Generally, I'm liking this it's so imaginative. I could not put your story down after reading when the plot was already starting, I did watch the series too. Guilty as charged.

I don't what people are complaining about...I honestly enjoy stories with oc's and self inserts gives an enthralling outlook, where even the tiniest changes seen can lead to a cascade of effects. Not noticeable but it's there and effective in a good way.

Keep on writing, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Don't worry...you can relax, I do like where it's going.

I would or could make a crazy suggestion for them to throw them off the track, change their scent afterall Spectral bats hunt by smell like most predators. Then again it still won't work, similiar to now matter how many times you wash a certain cloth there's always a particular scent of said creature or person that animals smell that humans don't.

Ash could always arm herself, carry a makeshift weapon just in case. And I quote from Miss Congeniality "I believe no woman should be without a basic knowledge of self-defense."

Cool! Is there another chapter for this story?

I see you updated with a few changes. Don't concern yourself some of us like your fics, they're really creative and inspiring.

Looking forward to the rest and how different, it might go, ya know "change the way the story's told".
Going to agree with Pantheon the other commentator, Ashlie could use a weapon, so she won't feel like the "damsel in distress" all the time. But it's really up to you to decide, there's no law you have to follow/listen to the suggestion to change something in a fic.