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Not much to say, honestly. But let's talk about the stuff that can be said:

1. Maleficent looking EVILLY over everything plotting her evil plots as any self-respecting evil villain does. xD

2. Rin v.s Issei arguement with poor Kotone getting caught in the cross-fire. I still love the fact that she has an expanded role here compared to before.

3. Aww, Waver's still missing Altair. Doesn't help that Kongou and Gray are quite thirsty for the guy. Also, we're about to fight a sea monster apparently...Eris, did you let out Cetus again?

And those are my three cents. Looking forward to the next chapter!

- K.O.B

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I have to admit, I really love the opening scene of Caster plotting. You did a really great job of capturing her arrogance.

And the scene with Issei was interesting. I'm guessing that Ruler is currently selecting candidates or at least giving them an edge? And the bits with him arguing with Rin was interesting.

And I liked the scene with Waver. Really bittersweet memories that turned into a comedic scene and then into a nice cliffhanger. I like it.

I look forward to the next chapter.

So this Maleficent is from her original medium? What a pity, I wanted to see Pete and the Heartless wreak havoc.

Interesting

buen fanfic-good fanfic

Just stumbled across a few of your Ffs and find them damn cool.
But could you please tell me which servants are used in your three stories Fate: Zero Submission, Fate Apocrypha: The Great Romanian War & Fate: Stay In the Fight? well, for the last two stop, who is already there? I've had it a lot more often where you use any characters and you don't find out who they are.

Please continue to write quickly.

With kind regards SupergodzillaSailorCosmos

Some things:

1. A well-adjusted Shirou is certainly new. The fact that Sakura and Ayako are his friends certainly help.

2. Rin in the background trying to act devious, but Kotone's trying her best to keep her from doing anything too drastic.

3. Of course, we have Kirei plotting stuff as usual with Foreigner.

Not much to say on my end, but I suppose that's fine. Looking forward to when the Grail War begins!

- K.O.B

Interesting chapter, dude. I liked Illya and Shirou's introduction into the fic. And it's interesting to see a Shirou that's actually pretty well adjusted. However, I'll admit the scene between Kotone and Rin wa something I didn't like. Probably because it wasn't well written or consisted of too much exposition.

But the last scene with Kirei more than made up for it. It was downright chilling.

I look forward to the next chapter.

A bit flatter compared to previous chapter in the beginning( but it may be because I'm not that great fan of Shirou's canon personality). The last part trough heavily makes up for it, Kirei is the madman we know and love, can't wait for his impact on this war and the countermesures against work.

I know you probably have all the servants planned out...
But Sir Aaron from Pokemon. I need him.

Maleficent. Caster. Oh dear. This is going to stir the pot.

Great chapter, dude. I'm glad to see what Arturia and Zora are up to, with the former running a dojo. I'm also interested in Caren's participation in the war, and look forward to see what servant she has.

Sorry if this review isn't much, but this chapter doesn't really have much for me to comment on.

Is that Ursrker Creed answering the Summons as Defender?

Tactical Genius FTW...