where did kagome leave shippo?! the poor child

Cute story, sub-par ending, but I liked reading it regardless.

AHAHAHAHAAAAAHHHHHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHA! I SCREAMED!

Despite the fact that this is extremely unlike Sesshoumaru, I find myself amused at his behavior.

Well done. One of the best Sesshomaru portrayals I've ever read.

cute story but I'm surprised the group just let her walk away and no one bothered to go after her still. Inuyasha was very quick to recover from Kagome back to Kikyo once back...but it was still an enjoyable read :)

Kagome is quite the jerk knowing how Sesshomaru has always been prior to joining him. He has literally nursed her back to health and pointed out her fault for not being battle ready and weak and she takes offence and slaps him? Inuyasha has done so much worst for so much longer and got away with it... I feel bad for Sesshomaru...and Im surprised he hasnt throat grabbed her

brilliant!~~~~~~~~~~

Hi! I've been on this site since it first started, new profiles over time. I absolutely love your story to death. I had the feels so hard. I've read my fair share of stories too and this is easily one of my favorites.

Quite well done. Finally something in my ship worth reading. The most critical thing I can say is some parts were not written so clearly and I wasn't fond of the formatting. I will def peruse your other works. BAM! I'm not really a big praise giver (it's rarely warranted).

i love d story.. bt their feelings cud b shown bttr..

i lv lv it..

Not bad! :) Quite nice though not a lot of depth. Just easy reading but Kagome has annoying moments where she turns overly sensitive with Sesshoumaru. Nice try for your first fanfic :)

AHHHHHHHHHHHHH I LOVE IT. Thank you so much for writing thissssssssssss. It's perfect.

Girlllllllllll. Breaks my heart.

AHHHHHHHH.