I am noticing a trend of my reviews getting longer and longer with each update.

praise the lord the update has come at long last and has not disappointed. I had to re-read some of my reviews to remember everything, and luckily I did because all I really have to say with this chapter 'is the same dam shit too the same dam guyI hope you get the reference here).

But I have to say that all the weapons turned out great, some of the other character relationships really showed off and the plot is very intriguing.

Emerald has never been a character I've never really fully appreciated as much as the RWBY writer's expect watchers to feel, but thank the lord for fanfiction as they have flushed out her character much more than the show has. But getting to the point I can see where Emerald and Grif could form a bond, and while I'm not entirely on board with it, am open to seeing where it goes.

I enjoy the interactions between Penny and Lopez, as there only being a handful of beings that understand Lopez and much less who admit to understand him (god Grif can make his exsistance hell). While it may seem cliche to the average reader I think that their personalities would connect as they are opposites a bit, and as people say opposites attract.

The double twist ending at the end of Ozpin having more secrets and the Freelancers hiding the Fall from everyone. While the Freelancers hiding it seems a little plot driven to keeping to the lore a bit, talk of a larger threat which connected to the very eventful firing of the Halo array shows how much of threat this being is. The Titans have me a bit lost but personally think towards the Cosmic Powers from the latest arc in RvB as they do look towards the greater good of the cosmos, unless these are beings which are from your other stories.

But there is nothing else I can really say about this chapter, but I did enjoy straying off the main RWBY cast which most stories never do. Also I think you nailed the length of the chapter to bring people back into it, and I am wondering if that was a Grifball reference in never bringing a sword to a hammer fight. But as always I look foward to your next update which I hope comes sooner rather than later.

I love you

Well we can say Cinder has officially fucked up her plan before it even began, if you ignore church you are literally ignoring an A.I who can find 30-40 ways to kill you

The Reds And Blues, the most idiotic team that only has 4 capable leaders (3 if you are excluding Church), but when the shit hits the fan they can be the best if not the only team that can take out a bunch of people when giving their all, and if they can fight a huge robot army and stop a civil war as well as kill one of the most toughest opponents, then they should not be underestimated

A work of art

I’m just saying but I think Caboose is acting TOO smart. And a bit too serious. But that’s just me.

Overall it’s decent.

Glad to see there’s a fanfic where Dust rounds are superior to gunpowder rounds.

dead

I hope you continue doing this story

Just making another review here for some weapon idea's I've come up with.

First with Tucker having his sword and at the this point of time no one knowing how it works and no way to seemingly alter it I believe that him loosing his sword for a RWBY style weapon could lead to problems and that if he were to have a RWBY style weapon his sword should be implied in someway as having the sword/key opens paths for some creative options that you can make along the line.

A weapon idea for Doc/O'malley, a rocket launcher (Halo 3 version)/sheild/staff. Now I know that this is three weapons in one but I thought of something that the characters are known for as the two personalies is the reason for this, (now a key part of the weapon is that the rocket tubes of the rocket launcher that fans of RvB and Halo are accustomed to don't change) the shield would be used by Doc as he is a pacifist and about helping people and it's appearance is just as simple as the rocket launcher but with the tubes further apart. Now with the staff it's basically the two rocket tubes connecting end to end and the way you have had O'malley be in your stroy fits the way he is and the rocket launcher should be already known for anyone who watches RvB.

Now character's I've thought about weapons for but can't get an idea for but know some guide lines to follow (as a theme for when I come up with weapon ideas is making sure they have the possibility of working) are for;
Sarge- obviously a shotgun for gun form but for a melee weapon I think some sort of bludgeoning weapon would fit his character well.
Simmons- for a ranged weapon I think rocket launcher could work for him as in the large fights he is often seen using one but for a melee weapon I think something that is made for keeping enimies back (like a spear) fits his character well.
Donut- all I've got for him is something that involves his amazing throwing arm.

being stuck at home has given me the time to come up with these things to help you and now wait with more excitement for the next update as I quickly run out of things to do at home.

Ok so I have a weapon idea it’s a sword that splits into pieces so it’s like a whip I think this would be a good weapon for tucker

Another weapon is a shotgun that turns into a a katana this I think is perfect for sarge

I don’t have any other ideas hope you use mine or at least part of mine

Sincerely alduin

Dawe thouhgt there was a chapter

great to see an update with this and I have to say that you did a much better job for this PSA when compared to your other one (which is more of a short than a PSA), you brought up a current day event and gave useful information which PSAs are about.

I'm not going to leave an actual review on this as it was just focused on getting the information out. But one thing I will say is that I may not always read new chapters quickly or leave reviews like I usually do because of school.

with you saying that your stories will be sharing the same universe (like the MCU) I suggest that you don't make it that readers have to read all your stories (which I don't as I just don't have the time to read them) to understand whats going on and that if something happens in one story affects another, that there is some sort of explanation that explains it in the affected story.

I have a suggestion for a weapon for Caboose, a mecha-shifting Assault Rifle/Battle Axe. An MA5B assault rifle (the Halo CE one). In rifle form it looks like a normal assault rifle but their is a large thick round blade that goes from the ammo counter too slightly further than the barrel (it doesn't block the barrel but lies above it), when in battle axe form the under parts of the rifle move down to make the handle of the weapon and the blade extends out slightly. I've tried to make the concept as simple as I could make it, the general idea of it is being large heavy weapon that compliments Caboose's Herculean strength.

Another suggestion I have for a weapon is for Lopez, a missle pod (from Halo 3gravity hammer (the type 2 gravity hammer in Halo Reach). In the rifle form it looks like a normal missle pod but the sides of the front of the weapon are replaced with the hammer part of the gravity hammer and the back part of the weapon is not as thick, when in hammer form the barrel retracts inside the hammer and the back of the weapon extends to form the handle, it will turn out to look like the gravity hammer but the hammer part won't have the blade. This weapon is something that I thought of that fits his self proclaimed title of 'Lopez the Heavy' and when explaining how the hammer has the smashing effect that gravity hammers have just say it uses gravity dust.

If you want to use either of the suggestions you can use the descriptions I have given too explain to readers and maybe you can shout out the people who gave you suggestions.

Thats all I have to say here and can't wait until the next update of the story.

Okay first, The leader of team JNPR's name is spelled "Jaune" NOT "Juane"! GET IT RIGHT!
Second, the corona virus is bull s**t. It's basically just an easier to catch version of the flu when all's
said and done. The only people at risk are those with crippled immune systems, no different then the
common cold. In other words, unless your a newborn infant, or an extremely old person, IT'S NOT
GOING TO HURT YOU!

Interesting story, more please