Reviews for Reyne's Rebirth
BMS chapter 7 . 4/12
Awesome!
Very nice scenes w/ Dani.

An interest of 8000 Dragons for 40 years seems rather low though. Doubly so when you figure they didn't have any usuary laws to speak of.
Svenion chapter 7 . 4/10
i love the pacing of this story, as well as the smut to plot ratio!
Starway Man chapter 6 . 3/11
Nice chapter, plenty of smut and even a little plot development, well done.
daspeedforce chapter 6 . 3/11
So Randal is just going to share his wife?
Aamer chapter 5 . 2/28
thanks.
Guest chapter 1 . 2/14
Cersi remain a Silent Sister ? When pigs fly.! She will get up to something !
BMS chapter 4 . 2/14
Well, Dany certainly enjoyed her lessons.
Starway Man chapter 4 . 2/14
Hmm, sister in law instead of good-sister? Gotta watch the lingo, my friend...and nice start, with GoT-style sex ed. by Elia for Dany! And it was good to learn Baelish's days are numbered, while Reyne was in between *pleasuring* women. Robb's POV on things was pretty good in the next section, but the girl talk between Rhaenys and Dany later on was much better, not sure why but it definitely caught my eye! Coulda been the spanking or the mention of the Jon/Arya incest, I suppose...

Rhaegar's musings in the subsequent scene were also interesting - Tywin's body was actually fed to the dogs by Tyrion? I assume this was done in secret and the King learned of it through his spies, otherwise that would have caused problems of various kinds... And reading between the lines after the conversation between Ned Stark and Rhaegar, Jamie will soon be killed off in this story, right? Dany's deep-throating skills and the story behind that were okay, but later on - "king's meeting room"? Try "solar", instead! And I wasn't expecting plans of a triple wedding, or Ned Stark to be so accepting of his nephew violating his daughter - well done on surprising me with all that. And Rhaegar being so blasé on being killed was almost funny, nice ending there.
Starway Man chapter 3 . 2/11
Elia is pregnant again? I thought she couldn't have another child with Rhaegar after Aegon, that it would kill her - unless this is part of the plot you're building up to? Anyway, it was good to see things from Lyanna's POV, and then Rhaegar's...although, Reyne saying "Your Highness"? That shoulda been 'Your Grace'! I liked Reyne's reference to Lyssa Arryn too, although shouldn't her husband Jon have been referred to as 'Lord Arryn' or 'my Lord Hand' rather than 'Ser Jon'?

The bathtub conversation was pretty cool, and I liked your hint of more Robb/Rhaenys in the future. The next scene from Daenerys' POV was alright, but I wasn't sure about that stuff with Reyne siring bastards on the women of the families that owe him debts - as far as I know, that was considered a sin according to the Faith of the Seven, or at the very least a stain on one's honor according to those who keep to the Old Gods in the North. Anyway, Rhaegar not wanting to know details about what his sister gets up to in the bedroom was handled well, and Dany getting 'training' on how to please her future husband was rather amusing, in its own way.

I look forward to what you come up with next, of course!
Starway Man chapter 2 . 2/5
Nice update, I especially enjoyed the Robb/Rhaenys stuff; there's simply not enough of that 'ship out there. Hope we see more soon!
lunacyvonklaus chapter 1 . 12/5/2019
How come lyanna is somewhat happy go lucky? Didn't even have to grief for her family
Starway Man chapter 1 . 11/25/2019
Interesting start to this story, I initially thought it would be your standard might-have-been if Rhaegar had won at the Trident - but the introduction of the Reynes and Tarbecks was a new variation on the theme, I just wish you had shown (not mentioned) Tywin being exiled that way! Hmm, there were some things I wondered about; like whether Daenerys was born in this AU, and whether it will be a Jon/Arya 'ship fanfic, and what further role Melisandre will play. Oh, and a few other things I noticed:

1) No way you could get from the Trident to the Tower of Joy in Dorne within three days. It's like half a continent away, and even naval transport wouldn't be enough.

2) I thought Lord Jon Connington had already been sent into exile by the time of the final battle between Rhaegar and Robert, and the Lord Hand to Aerys at this point was Qarlton Chelsted? I would like to know how the man managed to stick around with getting burned by the Mad King.

3) Why didn't Lyanna die in childbirth? I can't see how the presence of Rhaegar and Ned arriving in Dorne (somewhat early, in fact) prevented that whole bed of blood scenario - no mention of a Maester accompanying them and saving her life was made.

Anyway, I look forward to seeing where you take the story next!
anarion87 chapter 1 . 11/10/2019
nice story so far
Felon GT chapter 1 . 11/10/2019
Not all reynes are guilty and shouldnot have died during the westerland rebellion like the children, however some did deserved it. Like ellyn, and her brothers with what they conspired. So would this survivor acknowledge that these relatives of his fucked them up but will have vengenve on the innocents that need not die and were in the middle of the crossfire.