| Reviews for Senju Naruto: The Tempest |
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   hinatanamikazesama chapter 8 . 7/24 I hope make story NARUTO-SAMA x tsunade plaseee |
| deathdragon2.0 chapter 8 . 7/21 what will happen to sasori according to tje anime he was the one who killed the sandaime kazekage |
| PrimeEmperor chapter 3 . 7/17 i hope you add these girls because senju line only Tsunade and him so he must take CRA program |
| Guest chapter 8 . 7/1 Please updated |
| silversnitch4765 chapter 5 . 5/31 Unconscious again! It is getting ridiculous, fast! |
| silversnitch4765 chapter 4 . 5/31 So every time he releases his chakra he loses consciousness? This is like the third or fourth time, the fight lasted what two to three min or so and he blacks out? |
| silversnitch4765 chapter 2 . 5/31 I think the jumping around with the time skips confused you. Naruto at 8 was 5’1” and 6 yrs later he is 5’4”? Then you say the only one at the funeral that notices him are his mother and Mito, then in the next paragraph where you are mentioning the up and comers you say Kushina is the second Kyuubi holder after Mito died a few years previous? The story is all over the place, I think you should proof read this and sure up the timeline. |
| arjtrunks chapter 8 . 5/15 This story is amazing! Finally Tobirama is getting the respect he deserves. To many stories about the other kages but none about Tobirama. |
| YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 2 . 5/11 WTF is Bleach crap doing in here? |
| lara5170 chapter 8 . 4/29 It would be cool if Naruto invented the move 'Kirin, be gone with a thunderclap'. If he is going to eventually basically be Sasuke's dad it would be cool if Sasuke recreates that move. |
| Primarx chapter 8 . 4/29 enjoy reading your so far. great job) |
| Nobu Glover Rivera chapter 8 . 4/29 Kay kay, i binged through the entire thing and I'm in love with the story, seriously, maybe it could do with Naruto fainting a little less lmao,. But at least it's reasonable, about the pairing tho, I really like the Naruto/Mikoto chemistry and it would be hilarious for a Senju and an Uchiha to be together, you know?, Also like the little Kushina chemistry but I'm guessing since you like Minato so much you're going to pair them :P, I was thinking maybe about a Naruto/Mikoto/Kushina, that would be fun to read, your writing is smooth for the most part and I love that, can't wait for next update, take care and rest well!. |
| ThatCrazyBrit94 chapter 8 . 4/27 Faved and followed looking forward to the next update |
| ThatCrazyBrit94 chapter 1 . 4/27 Faved and followed |
| Guest chapter 8 . 4/24 Great chapter, can’t wait to see naruto kill fugaku |
