Are they mentally disabled?! It's like basic rule of basic rules to not enter or exit your home in costume... Also waiting for more chapters as it's my favorite SI of MCU universe at the moment.

god...

please change his name from 'Noir' to literally anything else...
anything else would be less cringe-worthy than 'Noir'.

2 chapters and i already loved your story. Thank you very much for the effort of making this fanfic. Stay healthy and such.

excellent chapter, the wait was worth it

I feel like our Mc needs to take a self defense class or something I’m not a big fan of the just punch it harder or kicking it harder style he has going on. Maybe boxing like the original noir or Muay Thai or something. You could have his new costume look and act like the red hood costume. But like all black and a spider instead of a bat, would be cool so see that swinging from skyscrapers in New York if i lived there in a comic book. Plus it would be kind of intimidating.

Thank god you’re still updating! Can’t wait for the next chapter.

I like the story so far but the passing seems a little fast for me. I’d like to see more of Ethan and felicity moments out of costume.

I don't understand why he just didn't go to Peter. They both got bit by spiders and he has powers there's not much of a leap to guess he's Spiderman.

To the guest: why don’t you write it if you don’t like it?

not bad at all. hmm, I do wonder if the new suit would look like the intimidating black suit with red lenses and spider from the game. though i'm sure the jacket would be modified to look like the Trench-vest with the red spider on its back to keep a bit of the 'prototype' work. figured that the vest would be convenient due to the pockets and space in the front to fit spare shooters and specialty webs. I also wonder if his own 'Way of the Spider' will have grapples to fit with the "Trapdoor Spider" he seems to take after? also, will 'White Tiger' be another possible pairing and way to make a love triangle to make the romance a bit more real? pretty sure that Peter is stuck between Gwen and MJ at the moment. looking forward to more of this. no doubt the Stan cameo is coming up. I wonder how it would look like with the 2 spiders against Lizard this time around instead of a tag-team round last time they clashed? this will be epic. until then, later!

very good job with the chapter

You got it all wrong.

Humming a few bars of “Sunflower” isn’t the magic key that un-sticks a spider-person’s hands from things. Miles kept getting stuck because he kept Freaking Out. When he freaked out, he couldn’t relax his hands. Peter asks: “What do you do to relax?” Miles relaxes by listening to music.

The key is to Relax Your Hands.

Your OC isn’t freaking out over his sticky fingers. No, no, he expected this. He knew it was going to happen. His hands were relaxed going in. He isn’t going to get his hands stuck in the first place. And humming “Sunflower” isn’t going to un-stick his fingers if that’s not what he typically does to relax.

Write it again.

very nice. though I do wonder if Ethan will try to use his smarts more often, not unlike the 90's animated series Peter; like when he was dealing with the one-time thief "The Spot" getting Fisk's interest in his scientific mind. looking forward to the rest and more. will the black garbed duo run into Iron Fist and the Hand? figured that The Hand would be the ones to fund Death Bridges and use the survivors as possible soldiers as well as try to plant evidence into Rand Industries. looking forward to more. until then, later!

Yea cell phones can be tracked and hopefully caller id does not give away his identity. So giving away his number would not be smart plus calling the cops on his phone not good should have found one of the gang members phones to place it.

I do not like The MCU version of Spider-man that made his to much of a fan boy of Stark. While I like the Stark Suit I would rather it was Made By Peter the a gift from Stark, if it was me I would take it as I did not make it. I would rather use my own intelligence and handwork for my guer then have others help as it would put me in debt to them even in the smallest way.

Noir is not my fav version of Spider-Man but he far from the my most hatted so I will give it s shot.

I do hope your do not make the same stupid mistakes that Peter does in well any media for example Glasses, sure the Bite may have fixed his eye site but to just quit using glasses just like that it stupid, he should pull a Superman/Supergirl and use fake glasses. and another he needs to learn how to fight and not just rely on his powers.