| Reviews for Warlock |
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   vmage2 chapter 1 . 1/28 Good start. You keep using "birb" in place of "bird" though. |
| Silber D. Wolf chapter 1 . 12/25/2019 great |
| Jrocker105 chapter 1 . 12/11/2019 The |
| xbox432 chapter 1 . 12/5/2019 One thing is for sure, with those stats you sure as hell didn't munchkin your way through the campaign. Congrats on making it to 20... god I'm jealous. After 10 years I still haven't maxed out a character. Freakin' ADHD friends can never finish a campaign before they get bored. Or we all die. Either or. I'll be looking forward to seeing this story continue whenever (or if) you get around to writing more. I haven't found that many good D&D fics like this so I do hope your muse gives us another chapter! This was well written and edited, and the character seems fun from the introduction. |
| Kablueblblay chapter 1 . 12/3/2019 This looks like a amazing train-wreck in progress, thank you for the chapter. :) |
| frankieu chapter 1 . 11/27/2019 interesting start of a story looking forward to more wonder how battle's will work with d&d rulles |
| A chapter 1 . 11/23/2019 eldritch blast. Eldritch Blast! ELDRITCH BLAST! EEEEELLLLLL- |
| FerunaLutelou chapter 1 . 11/20/2019 Overall: noice work. Really like the idea. IMHO it would be better if the story was written from third person (but its mostly personal preference), was more descriptive (otherwise it feels like we are rushing through the story instead of slowly soaking in the situation, but again, thats just my personal preference) and had proper scenes that have beginning, middle and an end, with proper line breaks between the scenes (most stories on this website are structured this way cause it is very convenient, but you do you). Not an advice, critique or anything like that, just my opinion. Good luck! |
| ecoolasice chapter 1 . 11/19/2019 More if you will, this tea tastes marvelous. |
| Spartan3909 chapter 1 . 11/18/2019 Thanks for the chapter _. |
| teckbears1 chapter 1 . 11/18/2019 Oh, I'll enjoy it. I quite like it actually. I'll wait to see what the future holds before further opinion. |
| EffectedNote312 chapter 1 . 11/18/2019 The start is pretty good so far I could use a bit of explanation as a person who has never really played DnD but other than that I don't really have any problems so far though I would like to know what his patron is, out of curiosity. |
| The Lazy Dragon chapter 1 . 11/18/2019 Oh this is gonna be good! I love these two series and they always make good stories together And with u as the author... Well no need to explain |
