Reviews for The Arcane Craftsman
Tristram Shandy chapter 9 . 8/6
Definitely have to disagree on the idea of saving the crystal for the upcoming test. There's no guarantee that the more obstructionist nobles would allow him to keep whatever he makes since it's a "punishment." Better to made a less personalized weapon for that.

On the umbral stone, you changed the rank from C to B this chapter. B rank implies a rarity that doesn't seem to exist when it eachlien gets you a couple dozen pounds. Plus, a cubic meter probably weighs upwards of 3 tons. Just how strong is Jaune if he can carry that much that far?
Guest chapter 9 . 8/3
I dont know if the person asked you or not, but someone is stealing your idea for this fic. The title is "Arcane Craftsman Jaune Arc" and it is by Striker777.
blue roach chapter 9 . 8/3
Hey great story I'm really enjoying this and cannot wait for any of your storys to update. The one thing I want to know is what jaune got out of the boxs in his inventory since you have it so he can only have one instance of either anyway keep up the great work and stay safe.
Gast chapter 7 . 8/3
Your writing style is fucking great and the way dialogue flows feels natural, but the best thing by far is the way you can show the characters emotions. The snippet about enya was beautifully done and I wish I found this story earlier.
dragonfighter11 chapter 9 . 8/1
This is a single pairing isnt it? In any case I hope Jaune and Pyrrha get together soon, assuming that's the pairing. Loving the story btw, it's interesting~
Argus456 chapter 9 . 8/1
Calling it now, it's either Merlot or Watts playing god with this world. And considering that they arrived through a gate, I would not be surprised if this alchemist is one of those mages in Atlas asking Ironwood for permission to experiment on living beings but was denied so they developed(or stole) a method to enter a world separate from theirs and did whatever they wanted here.

Or the idiot alchemist is from a whole other world and Jaune just stumbled onto his 'facility.
Lord of Fleas chapter 9 . 8/1
Huzzah! Who will this Lich be? Are they the Alchemist, or just some random schmuck unfortunate enough to be cursed with immortality?
I don't really care, because I'll find out later! Yay!
Great chapter, and thanks for the Update.
NyaNyaKittyFace chapter 9 . 8/1
Was rereading the previous chapter. How the heck did I not realize “Y9k4i” was “Yokai”?! Ren’s a freaking Yokai or rather a Hanyō seeing as he gets it from his mother’s side. Now the question is what kind. Yuki Onna maybe? I doubt Kitsune or a Hone Onna.

Ooh first hint of his new gifts.

I was honestly wondering about materials myself. I feel like Beason or the King should provide it seeing as they ARE the ones having Jaune create the gear. I say gear cause I’m not sure if Jaune is actually going to create a weapon or surprise us with armor or something else.

Damn...That’s just sad. I mean 0.0003%?! SERIOUSLY?! How powerful is this rune?

I’m looking forward to when Uther is brushing down.

Ya a fiery tornado of death is a clear sign that you need better control.

Holy crap that’s huge! Plenty of room for customization though. Like adding workshop.

I fucking knew as soon as you started talking about how Jaune needed to work harder to use his rune properly he was going to get excited! I do wonder if the runes one Ruby and Blake’s weapons can’t be improved or fixed?

Oh shit that smart! Going to the punishment zones to collect material will both help him grow stronger as a worrier and as a Arcane Craftsman!

Ah ok. Now that clears up my confusion on other “Players”. They are from other multiverses. That actually makes me feel better for quite a few reason.

Though I do wonder if Jaune can get an item or material that’s unique to another dimension?

I feel like the store will be of more use to Jaune than most other “Players”.

Jaune took out his arcane tools from his inventory, ignoring the edgy abyss line the system fed him.—This got a good chuckle from me.

Slightly less shitty Arcane Craftsman tools (C). Price: 1,143,217—Now THIS got a laugh from me.

Ok looks like I’m wrong about The stores use to Jaune.

I’m sorry I think I read that wrong. Did it say VISIT OTHER WORLDS?!

YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES FUCK YES! OH MY FUCKING GOSH YES! I DON’T CARE HOW LONG IT TAKES, JAUNE YOU BETTER WORK YOU’RE ASS OFF TO GET MURAMASA’S ARMOUR!

Aw come on! He can’t use it in battle!? I legit wanna cry. Oh well. I can only hope he gets another armor that I love. Like Porto Saber’s armor or Archer Emiya’s. Also, what is this unknown ability/power Jaune has?

Can I just say I’m loving this info dump on Jaune’s skills.

I’m happy the System has a personality again. It’s freaking funny.

I’m curious if Weiss is going to question Jaune about his disappearance. Maybe think he was kidnapped?

Maybe even a screeching penguin or something.—LMFAO

I’m guessing lions or some manner of beasts are hiding in the tall grass?

The spellcaster's blessing has nullified the nullifying effect…not again.—I LOVE that the System sounds so pissed at this.

Oh cool, one of the first monsters from Solo Leveling. Fight fiercely, Jaune.

Hey it’s better than what I though was gonna happen. Instead of doing nothing, I thought the rune was gonna damage you.

YOU HAVE WEAPONS! Pretty sure Gáe Bolg would love the chance to cut loose.

Even if it was long, couldn’t Jaune use his flames to boost the distance he slid? Actually, I wonder if he can actually use his flames for mobility? It’d be nice if he could.

Well that answers my previous question...I think.

Wolf livers could probably be used as alchemical ingredients.

There’s that mysterious little shade.

I hope his amour will be automatically repaired when he leaves the punishment zone.

Damascus Steel huh? I wouldn’t have thought it up there with Mythril or Orichalcum, but apparently it’s a mystic metal so...

Well that was unexpected.

That’s a lot of weapons. Is he about to pull a Shirou and gain some weapon schematics?

Wait Urik? As in THAT Urik? Also, yes he did.

Loving this deeper inspection of Jaune’s character. Both past and present.

Well that’s surprising. We not only get to see Jaune learn more about his abilities, but we also gain an deeper understanding of Runes. Like the fact they can be PRESTIGE!

Jaune being extremely reckless this chapter. I noticed it when he first entered the punishment zone, but it’s getting ridiculous. He’s constantly setting himself up to get hurt or die!

That...didn’t seem good. That was either another play, the bird’s “master”, a lingering spirit(possibly a lich), or some combination.

Fuck the merchant’s guild and FUCK JACQUES!

How the fuck did I know Roman was going to be Blake’s contact?! HOW?! Also NEO!

Well shit. Little shade thing clinging to Jaune’s shadow. You might want to help the him!
quaker212 chapter 9 . 8/1
Awesome update
Uday Sra chapter 9 . 8/1
Awesome
merendinoemiliano chapter 9 . 8/1
Nice job Trough fights need to improve. Good work.
Simplyhiccstrid chapter 9 . 7/31
God I can’t wait for another chapter!
Obsidian Nova Arc chapter 9 . 7/31
yep loving this so much, gave ideas for how deal with my systems damn numbering on attributes, wonder if he will make an epic staff ifront of the nobles for Weiss
Avalanche-dragoon chapter 9 . 7/31
The moment Weiss mentioned experimentation I knew this would happen.
mermizle chapter 9 . 7/31
Gah, okay still more time before the next craft but it's okay because he was gathering materials!
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