Reviews for if you should fall to pieces
WriterAtHeart14 chapter 1 . 11/24/2019
I loved this and I genuinely wish this is what happened. I thought of this exact scenario when I watched Max cleaning up El in the bathroom. It would’ve been such a good opportunity for Mike to talk to El and hopefully explain and apologize. Granted, that would’ve taken out some “tension” in the episodes following that, but it would’ve made me feel a little better, haha. Regardless, this was beautiful. Thank you for sharing!
phieillydinyia chapter 1 . 11/24/2019
I LOVED THIS SO MUCH!
IreneRays chapter 1 . 11/24/2019
Simply gorgeous! I can definitely picture this as part of the series!

You nailed it buddy!

Lots of love from Irene Rays
disneyprincess315 chapter 1 . 11/23/2019
My. Heart. That. Was. So. Sweet. You’re. Brilliant!
ishiptoast chapter 1 . 11/23/2019
Oh. Wow. I uh, don’t have words. This is what we needed: this scene, a perfect parallel to season 1, would have been incredible. It would have held the emotional weight of the sauna test that the real scene (her and max mocking mike) seriously lacked. Your writing is beautiful, I loved this so much. Thank you for being so talented.
the Mandalorian terminator chapter 1 . 11/23/2019
Beautiful l wish this had happened in the show and I liked the callback to them in Season 1.
darthstormer chapter 1 . 11/23/2019
Sweet and powerful and something I wish the show would have given us. And a perfect callback to the (oddly) simpler times in that same setting in S1.