Reviews for A Story To Be Told Begins Thus
avjuan37 chapter 2 . 3/31
please make more chapters
avjuan37 chapter 2 . 2/15
please make more chapters
Anti-weeaboo Faction chapter 1 . 2/2
Aleister? Really? Why not put this in the toaru and rwby sect and put accelerator as mc? XD
biob1 chapter 2 . 12/19/2019
Good work
Brehze chapter 2 . 12/17/2019
Loving the story keep it up
RTXtreme chapter 2 . 12/11/2019
Make Achilles and Jeanne from Fate/Grand Order
Naruto x Jeanne having 8 children by cannon
Plus Achilles being overprotective dad for Pyhrra and threatening Jaune
kyuubi ruler of all bijuu chapter 2 . 12/13/2019
Awesome
Guest chapter 2 . 12/8/2019
Aw man, why didn’t you do some scenes from the sleep over in the auditorium!?
Obersturmfuhrer chapter 2 . 12/10/2019
Where's glynda or roman or junior or maybe blake's parents?.. why you make 2 oc instead of using an actually existing characters?. And that ocs are horrible.
Guest chapter 2 . 12/7/2019
Who will Naruto be paired with!?
The Storm Master 567 chapter 2 . 12/9/2019
This got even more interesting. Was hoping you'd have Phyrra's father or mother in the story so that's cool. And I like you having Willow as a student too. Would he cool to have her paired with Naruto rather than that asshole on cannon as I can see Naruto raising those kids much better.
Lt Juan Rico chapter 2 . 12/9/2019
Another good chapter, interesting interactions between the characters
Maplemare chapter 2 . 12/9/2019
This is Yangsome! XD gimme more
SHADOWNINJAMASTER chapter 2 . 12/9/2019
Awesome chapter keep it up
KakeruPB chapter 2 . 12/8/2019
Hmm Interesting take, wonder how far u will go.
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