Reviews for A Story To Be Told Begins Thus |
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avjuan37 chapter 2 . 3/31 please make more chapters |
avjuan37 chapter 2 . 2/15 please make more chapters |
Anti-weeaboo Faction chapter 1 . 2/2 Aleister? Really? Why not put this in the toaru and rwby sect and put accelerator as mc? XD |
biob1 chapter 2 . 12/19/2019 Good work |
Brehze chapter 2 . 12/17/2019 Loving the story keep it up |
RTXtreme chapter 2 . 12/11/2019 Make Achilles and Jeanne from Fate/Grand Order Naruto x Jeanne having 8 children by cannon Plus Achilles being overprotective dad for Pyhrra and threatening Jaune |
kyuubi ruler of all bijuu chapter 2 . 12/13/2019 Awesome |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/8/2019 Aw man, why didn’t you do some scenes from the sleep over in the auditorium!? |
Obersturmfuhrer chapter 2 . 12/10/2019 Where's glynda or roman or junior or maybe blake's parents?.. why you make 2 oc instead of using an actually existing characters?. And that ocs are horrible. |
Guest chapter 2 . 12/7/2019 Who will Naruto be paired with!? |
The Storm Master 567 chapter 2 . 12/9/2019 This got even more interesting. Was hoping you'd have Phyrra's father or mother in the story so that's cool. And I like you having Willow as a student too. Would he cool to have her paired with Naruto rather than that asshole on cannon as I can see Naruto raising those kids much better. |
Lt Juan Rico chapter 2 . 12/9/2019 Another good chapter, interesting interactions between the characters |
Maplemare chapter 2 . 12/9/2019 This is Yangsome! XD gimme more |
SHADOWNINJAMASTER chapter 2 . 12/9/2019 Awesome chapter keep it up |
KakeruPB chapter 2 . 12/8/2019 Hmm Interesting take, wonder how far u will go. |