I love this so much! I beat fallen order last night and I was so shook by the ending...so I looked for this and I love it!

Great, I love it

amazing chapter

at this point, I would like to say a huge THANK YOU for writing this fanfic. I finished fallen order this month, yet I was really unhappy about Trilla's death. She truly seemed to be redeemed but never got the chance to start over again... The sequel of fallen order could have been something like a journey about her redemption, playing Cal and her and introducing many new interesting villains (including Starkiller). I think I would have made a sacrifice of Cere, so Cal and Trilla would have escaped the fortress.
Yes, I still have some hope but hope dies last :(

Anyway, there is nothing to complain. But yeah, from my point of view, introducing Mando and Vos/Ventress was unnecessary. You even said they managed to kill Dooku lol... why? :D But on the other hand, I loved the introduction of Starkiller, one of my favorites. If he is to be integrated into the canon, they have o change the original story anyway. But I definitely wouldnt clone him. Ok, it felt like the crew is travelling nonstop without any break, however, it is complicated to show a concrete timeline in written form so no worries. Just as a friendly reminder; by that time all clo

at this point, I would like to say a huge THANK YOU for writing this fanfic. I finished fallen order this month, yet I was really unhappy about Trilla's death. She truly seemed to be redeemed but never got the chance to start over again... The sequel of fallen order could have been something like a journey about her redemption, playing Cal and her and introducing many new interesting villains (including Starkiller). I think I would have made a sacrifice of Cere, so Cal and Trilla would have escaped the fortress.
Yes, I still have some hope but hope dies last :(

Anyway, there is nothing to complain. But yeah, from my point of view, introducing Mando and Vos/Ventress was unnecessary. You even said they managed to kill Dooku lol... why? :D But on the other hand, I loved the introduction of Starkiller, one of my favorites. If he is to be integrated into the canon, they have o change the original story anyway. But I definitely wouldnt clone him. Ok, it felt like the crew is travelling nonstop without any break, however, it is complicated to show a concrete timeline in written form so no worries. Just as a friendly reminder; by that time all clones have already been phased out of the imperial army. Even the purge troopers werent clones anymore.

And for the upcoming chapters, PLEASE let Cal fall deeper into the dark side, and let him do the inquisitor stuff more obeydiant and seriously from time to time. He also needs a deeper connection to his inquisitor partner (some kind of friendship)

stay healthy and have a good time. Greetings from Germany

Pair all 3 together

I love it but could merrin and cal be more intimate and Darth vader finding out about there relationship but does nothing but encourage them both to embrace the dark side whilst being boyfriend girlfriend and doing the mission for the Emperor then afterwards they both leave and cere finds em both and what I mean by intimate every detail they do init and cal battles merrin but she manages to redeem him whilst still going out then they find the rebels and cal and merrin kills vader and star killer but all in all keep up the dank job I really do love reading stuff about fallen order I love the pairing between cal and merrin they both suit each other well let me know when you add onto the story email me thank you for the good shit bro

I really find your way of cal being dry and naive never did like merrin kill her off not really any. Of that pairing

Hey there welcome back! There's no need to apologise for your absence we ALL have lives outside this website and sometimes that's more important, good thing I'm VERY good at waiting for updates.

Now for my review...I see that Cal's mission for the Emperor is to go find the SISTER of his former dead master, but he CAN'T say ANYTHING to ANYONE less he brings down the Emperor's Wrath on him and his friends. The Question is...just HOW will he pull this off without Vader, Trilla or the rest of the people he knows finding out? See you next update whenever you can manage it so I can find out! Good Health, Clear Body, Strong Mind!

Everything has started downhill ever since Merrin was shot with that stupid Haxion poison. I'm slowly losing hope in Cal freeing himself of the dark side's influence, and I won't be surprised if this ends up ironically with Cal and Trilla switching roles.

Also I'm disappointed that Ahsoka and crew seemed to be set aside after the events of Lothal. I guess she's just meant to be a side story in this fic.

I love love love it.

If Ezra is missing then the grand Inquisitor would already be dead

Hi I was just wondering if you are going to continue this? Unless you have school like I do then I dont mind, but I fell in love with this and desperately want/need more

Keep going please. This story is getting good! By the way I feel bad for the second sister that's taken Trilla's place, she might be better off with Cal and the others! About time other new Jedi come along soon!

I was trying to say that Naboo would've been Luke Skywalker's home if his family lived there together in a time of peace. I got cut off in the last review. However I am glad the gungans are back in Star Wars because I do like Jar Jar Binks!