Reviews for Not a Little Boy Anymore
Jimmyle311 chapter 5 . 6/16
I didn't expect the chapter to end that way brilliant
The Edible Scump chapter 5 . 6/8
Nice chapter. Thanks for writing.
Ariadne Venegas chapter 5 . 6/6
Yay! There is photos anymore!

I wonder about the dream... if the printing press was destroyed then They did it in a shared dream?
toile grant chapter 5 . 6/6
good
csgt chapter 5 . 6/6
Great chapter.

Really funny, I loved it and laughed out loud many times while I was reading this one.

Loved Gabrielle's little prank there with the dream. I can see why Harry thought it was the best dream ever. Interesting scenario for the dream, the printing press. I guess Fleur's worries about the pictures took them there, because it wouldn't be the most romantic place to pick. The love making in synch with the glowing-desintegration effect was amazingly written, showed the dream atmosphere very well and also the intensity of the love making as the climax destroyed the whole building.

Loved the Drapple wedding prank, very funny and a brilliant idea.

Wow, Bozo has a collection of pictures - and even one of Rita! I wonder if he's just a pervy who can't control himself or if he actually has a crush on the boss. The tables were turned when Bozo was the one photographed in a compromising position hehehe
Glad that Harry and Fleur found the stash and burned it down.

Looking forward to seeing what's next!
Aaron Leach chapter 5 . 6/6
Awesome chapter.
Brockster550 chapter 5 . 6/6
Bozo got caught in the act of his pleasure. I doubt he'll be hearing the ens of it. Theo pronouncing Draco and his green apple as a married couple was pretty funny. The comments about people feeling sorry for the apple getting thrown and Pansy getting jealous of the apple marrying Draco made it funnier. Nice chapter, looking forward to more!
Chaos Snow Kitsune chapter 5 . 6/6
Hurray! Another chapter! Malfoy getting ridiculed is always a treat. Hope to see more of this
toile grant chapter 4 . 5/30
good
Phoenix1137 chapter 4 . 5/5
I'm really liking your writing and this story.

One thing in this chapter that is bugging me a little is the formatting of the article at the end. It is hard to tell where the article ends and the reactions begin. I would like to see the article italicised or something similar to differentiate it from the rest of the story.

But other than that, keep up the good work.
CrayonHB chapter 4 . 5/2
Très bonne fanfic. J'espère qu'il y aura une suite sur les vacances d'Harry.
Xerzo LotCN chapter 4 . 4/24
disappointed this didn't become a harem but the revenge was funny while Daphne x cedric mention was disgusting
Brockster550 chapter 4 . 4/24
I was momentarily fooled by Daphne smacking Harry across the face for making love to her, with Fleur doing the same before leaving with Draco, then I realized it was a nightmare of Harry's.

It'll be interesting to see Harry spend the whole summer with the Delacours. Albus Too-Many-Names Dumbledore won't be happy with that, but it isn't his concern. Maybe in France, Harry can let the french ministry know that Sirius was innocent of the alleged crimes the whole time.

Rita's assistant named Bozo suited him perfectly, since he had the nerve to try and grab Fleur's arse before stopping with his hand only like an inch away. She definitely had the feeling he would try that, since she turned around to warn him not to do it. Nice chapter, looking forward to more!
Adol116 chapter 4 . 4/24
Interesting story looking forward to the next chapter
Axccel chapter 4 . 4/24
That's good. Glad this is back!
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