So much for a three story arc. Most intriguing. Keep writing

Oh wow! That was a bit unexpected and very intense! Excellently executed twist!

Your fight scenes are really incredible! I am always disappointed when people skip writing them so to find a story where the fight scenes make up a good part of a few chapters was really great.

OMG- my babyyy!

There's Gabriel worrying about his son! I was wondering when that would happen. I like how it all comes together- his worry for Adrien, and yet his brutal attack on Cat Noir.

A timeline! Excellent. Not sure you needed more tension, but this definitely added it! I don't know how far through summer they are, but even if summer just started, three months feels like a short time to defeat the baddie they've been trying to get for two years. Let the ticking clock commence!

Silly Lila. Don't you know by now? The MiracuTeam always wins.

I thought Mirage faded when touched? Or is it different when the Fox uses Mirage on themselves?

In the Christmas special, Gabriel sent out a Paris-wide notice about Adrien's disappearance, got everyone looking. Why didn't he do that here?

Ahhhhhhhh! The cliffhanger! Ahhhhhh! The tension! Ahhhhhhh! I'm going to pop! Ahhhhhh! I'm going to stop reviewing and go read!

*singsong* ~IIIIIIII can explain the Cheshire grin~

(hehe..tikki knows things)

Spot on!
Just one thing. Horses don't have leashes, they have lead ropes. Similar use, but they're different- a lead rope doesn't have a loop, because a horse can literally break your hand by accident if the lead is looped and they spook. Though I can see why Ladybug said "leash"; she wouldn't know the difference. Also, I'm not sure how likely a pony would be to charge toward predators like dogs, but given Ladybug's luck power it makes sense. (Yeesh, Me, rant much? Sorry.)
Thank you for switching between "pony" and "horse" so easily. It really annoys me when people act like they're two separate animals, or like a pony is a baby horse.

I highly doubt that Adrien will turn on Mari just to bring back his dead mom, especially since there's a good chance that Adrien will be the collateral of that wish.

*eats popcorn*

Ha! Get dunked on Lila!

Fucking Lila, the other person I hate.