Your story is going in an interesting direction, for all it’s still early days. I’m not sure how much I can believe that they’re falling for each other already. Especially Hermione, just as she’s putting to rest Bellatrix’s victims and recovering from her own torture. It feels forced at this point. She should be lashing out and afraid to close her eyes in Bellatrix’s presence, not getting a thrill from holding her hand. But otherwise the character development, especially Bellatrix’s, is captivating.

Well, I loved this chapter

I love this and I hope you keep going with it

Really enjoying this story so far looking forward to another update see what happens next especially with hepatitis and her sisters

Excellent chapter. very touching. You kind of feel bad for both Bella and Andy.

Ahhhh such a good idea, a twist on time travel, cant wait to read more

At the meeting in the beginning of the chapter, Bella shoots to her feet twice, without sitting down in between (and it really doesn't sound nice/seem plausible even if she did sit down in between)