They way you narrated Eiko taking control of her life and realizing she's not fated to die and your characterizations just gave the story such a hopeful tone. It was actually kind of comforting to read your story, which I was not expecting lol. Also, I like how much I got to know about your character in a short amount of time without it feeling like you're info dumping.

(Not saying your story is short, it's just in comparison to fics that take a few chapters to explore and understand a character- which is also not a bad thing. Idk I guess I just like how your characterization of Eiko was able to get me invested into her story in just a few words.)

I'll definitely be rereading this, thank you!

this actually made me cry a bit... love it

What a wholesome story. I love ittt 33

God damn, you write these awesome ideas .