It was nice of Wendy and Soos to try and comfort Stan, how they all blame themselves but not each other for not noticing the possession. And it was a surprisingly touching moment when Gabe presented that puppet. Pretty sweet scene for a joke boyfriend-of-the-week. I hope Mabel's plan works.

Completely isolating Dipper even in death was pretty sadistic, very fitting of Bill. Glad to see Mabel realise the truth, though it’s understandable why she didn’t see it at first. Pretty clever of Her to think of that solution, she needs all the help she can get to bear her burden.

Please update SOON!

Wow! Mabel, that’s really smart! I can’t wait to see what happens next.

Wrote a similar situation myself once. Hope the Duskertons are nicer in your story than they were in mine!

It's good to see Stan comfort Mabel in her darkest hour, even if they both blame themselves for that loss. And that Dipper's still searching for a way to contact his family after witnessing such a terrible sight. The Pines family always trying to help each other, no mater what.

This episode is one of my fave episodes and I really want to see where this story leads!

Update this as fast as possible please! I love this story! I am eager to find out what happens next!

The depictions of how death have hurt the main cast are believable and terrible. You show how losing someone close to you can affect Soos and Wendy, let alone how it's broken Mabel and hurt Stanley. And that ending was really something, the phone call no one should ever make or receive.

Your depiction of Bill is very well done. Cold, twisted, and spouting sinister jokes and teasing the heroes even at their lowest point. A true monster.

I do like alternate version of important events from the episodes. And this was one of my favourite episodes so I'll definitely stay tuned to see where this leads.