Please keep writing this. I love this, it's awesome. I am looking forward to seeing how Dalilah deals with the rest. Thank you for posting!

Please update your story soon!

I hope you can continue XD update soon

Love this story, hope for more. Would like more twin and Dumbledore interactions, I believe that cho is the pairing so some more of her would be nice

Please update more

A lovely story that I hope you can come back to one day. Take care of yourself :)

I've read most of your work since your andromeda X harry fics and this one in particular I would greatly enjoy seeing continued.

So far I am enjoying your story, hope you continue it. I especially enjoyed the “twins” meeting the twins scene and how the hat sorting went. Hopefully there will be more Sirius interactions in your story, just because I like his character.

aayye this was actually a really good read! I love how wildly different your fics are, real creative works of art.

updates?

I cam here for the Harry/Cho, which is my (unfortunately very niche) OTP. Sadly it doesn't seem like we're up to those bits yet.

I think your story is really fun, and face-paced to keep it engaging. Dalilah has enough history we're familiar with to have instant emotional depth, which isn't easy with OC Characters.
I think you might be floundering in the story because Dalilah already has all the keys to the future. She deposed Umbridge in a single chapter, she has Dumbledore foaming at the mouth and Snape on the constant verge of a heart attack. She has also destroyed 4 horcruxes before she has even started school - Voldemort will be a cinch at this rate. And I get the fun of having a power play against the characters who did Harry wrong in the canon, but then where is the tension in the story going to come from? If everything is going to be so easy, there is no conflict to drive the plot forward. Is the end goal for Dalilah to help Harry defeat Voldemort in this timeline? If so, at your current pace that would be done and dusted within the school year, if not earlier, and without our heroes even breaking a sweat.

If I'd recommend anything, it would be to introduce a bit of butterfly effect. Things seem to be going very well for Dalilah/Harry initially, but changing the timeline out of what she knows has unintended consequences. Maybe they depose Umbridge but Fudge simply denies connection with her and sends in someone worse instead, like an actual Death Eater. Maybe when Bellatrix gets out of Azkaban and checks her own vault and sees the destroyed cup, Voldemort checks on his other horcruxes and realises someone is onto him, and either moves the remaining ones or makes new ones.
And write some Harry/Cho :)
Hopefully this story will see another update someday.

Great start to the story, I hope you come back soon, I'm looking forward to seeing what trouble the twins cause for Voldermort and Dumbledore, especially with Sirius in the picture. Awaiting the next update.

Really liking this story. It's fun to read and you should definitely continue writing it because it is an amazing idea!

This looks like it is going to be great fun, please continue with it. I really like how you find a different angle to the stories every time!

Oh my! I am going to wait wait wait to see what the author does with Dalilah and Harry as they disconcert the no nose one. lol