Reviews for Project: ARES |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really hope the pairing is Penny. She's adorable and they're basically soul mates by now lol Just really hope when the beacon arc comes around, if it does, that Jaunes brain doesnt get hacked through Penny or something. That OP virus that Conder places is kinda bs imo |
![]() ![]() ![]() great story. it's started boring but now its shaping up into something. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Super noice. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome story friend! Is this a Jaune X Penny story or a Jaune X Winter story? Both ships are extremely rare so I'm having an extremely hard time choosing which I might prefer. On one hand, Penny is extremely cute and adorable on the other hand, Winter is such a tsundere. Love the story~ |
![]() ![]() Interesting story so far. I hope you continue it. I’ve enjoyed it so far, and aside form a few spelling and grammatical errors, which are few and far between, it’s pretty well written. I hope you update it soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just read through professionArc and decided I wanted to see more of your work, I’m really liking this premise and I’m excited to see where it goes, keep it up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yeah, so I just read through proffesionarc and this in like less than a week, this is really really good stuff, lot of spelling and grammar errors but you mentioned its a foreign language so I respect you more for writing in it. Now back to how great these are I love when people actually explore and adventure in fanfic and dont just copy paste into their chapters. Great work also the dialouge is really fun to read. More penny acting as cortana pls, although I really read her as a female Jarvis. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nice chapter! Glad you're back, I hope quarantine is treating you well! (as well as it could get at least) Just wanted to point something out: "The Room is basily interactive dream" should change to "The Room is basically an interactive dream". That's all, thanks for the chapter! |
![]() ![]() 'Preforming CPR for the past two minutes', that was great! |
![]() ![]() Whew, I'm glad you're back, at least! I really enjoy this story, so i'm glad you still update it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great story so far, the companionship of Jaune and Penny is equally as great but I wouldn't be surprised if Jaune started calling his trainer a Snow Devil |
![]() ![]() Oh well, at least Jaune has that smokin' hot wife to play vidya with |
![]() ![]() So I found this today and binged the entire thing. I'm not usually a fan of this ship but this is really well done, not to mention they're so cute together that I genuinely can't wait to read when she gets a body. Also, I very much would appreciate reading more fluff between them. I'll be waiting for the next chapter, good luck |
![]() ![]() GRIMM Eternal WOOHOO |
![]() ![]() ![]() Reminds me of Advanced Warfare I think, the whole VR training while being operated on. Beautiful execution nonetheless |