Awesome mate I love your story

The cross guard lightsabers are already the most cringy, not to mention self endangering (if your cross guard can harm you then its a failure), design I've ever seen but Harry's takes the cake. A "flat" lightsaber? with two extra blades shooting at at 45 degree? You realize that would look likebut with shorter sides, and would be more a hassle to use than anything else? It doesn't even qualify for the "Rule of Cool," just remove the guards and make it more like a chokuto.

And Voldemort is now a Sith, wonder how long until Harry gets to fight him. And Dumbledore and Palpatine are bound to cross paths at some point, that should be interesting.

Google and dictionaries were invented for a reason, please invest time and effort in acquiring one of the two.

SYMPA

Wow can't believe the Senate voted to force people to fight. Goes to show you the republic is corrupt.

Despite the problems with grammar and spelling in the early chapters this is turning out to be a rather interesting story, I look forward to seeing more.

Wow I really love this story. I can tell you were inspired by in all things balance. Love that story too . Look forward to more of this.

Are none of the adults going to question Dumbledore willing conscription of children? I can't imagine Yennefer not saying something about her children being forced to fight when they had a way to avoid it? The whole thing feels forced, like the only reason its happening is because you want it to happen.

great, not great
corpse, not corps

rude, not rood

scene, not seen
creature, not creator
how, not haw
again, not agen
take, not tack
being, not deing
known, not none

Most errors in this chapter seemed more like typos so your obviously improving, good work.

taking, not tacking
great, not grate
would, not wood
where, not ware
flights of stairs, not flites of stairs
wearing, nor warring
coat, not cote
pov, not prov
truth, not troth
how, not haw
just, not jest
these, not theas
while, not wile

"the young sores with the spectral parasite," what? Doyou mean sorcerer?

some, not sum
guest, not gest
haired, not hared
herself, not har self

The above is just me correcting words that were either used wrongly or just weren't real words. Any spell/grammar check app would correct them of you ran one before posting.

roofs, not rooves
private, not Privet
said, not sed

Ok so I reviewed after chapter 2 regarding the problematic grammar and I'm very glad to see that it was corrected very well. So thanks for that. In regards to the story itself, I like it very much! The pairing of Ashoka/Harry (if I understood correctly) is definitely not sth I would have chosen but it seems to work for this fic and I'm looking forward to what you make of it. Thanks for sharing and update soon!

I have no idea how you manage to spell words like uncertainty but write sed instead of said but you really need to correct your language with sth(e.g. grammarly or a beta) if you want people to be able to read this. :( Its especially sad because the story itself is very nice so far.