Enjoyed this story! On to the next one!

I just finished the last chapter of To Forgive Divine and wanted to let you know how much I've enjoyed all of your stories. You have a very nice writing style and such a grasp of how the characters speak. I've been rewatching SGA with my husband and accidentally made him think something from one of your fanfictions was cannon. That's how good you are. Looking forward to your next installment

I wanted to thank you for your incredible work with SGA stories! I just discovered these...well, freaksihly early this morning when I couldn't sleep and I've read through two of them because they were so engrossing. Before reading more, I wanted to make sure I started sending you some feedback so you'd know that your efforts are valued.

I think this is one of the most sensitive handlings of 'Trinity's aftermath out there. You really do a fabulous job writing the characters as human and acknowledging that their actions in episodes have ontological inertia. You add a tantalizing extra layer of depth to the TV show, showing both how the characters make choices about what they are and aren't going to think about at the moment and ways in which emotion overpowers their decision making at times.

You've used that to make a fine slection of stories that can stand alone (quite well) but which really sparkle, taken all together.

Lastly, I really love the way you ended this story, with Shepperd drawing parallels between several stories and realizing he can choose which kind he wants to live in. That relly struck me as...precious. Valuable, maybe.

In short, I find these to be exciting stories which are emotionally satisfactory and reasonably tightly plotted. They are certainly masterpieces of their type. Thank you for sharing them.

Yay! *applause, applause* sigh...well done! Thank you for sharing another excellent, well written and enjoyable installment to SGA! Looking forward to the next one!

All's right with the world! That was a good talk John had with Rodney...well done!

They found Rodney! Yay! Glad Ronon punched Bowers!

Oh...that was intense! Well done!

Rodney won't help Vance get John! He'll prevent if he can! Hurry John and Ronon! Hold on Rodney!

Glad Ronon went with John!

Glad that General Landry gave Rodney some helpful advice, Rodney could use a friend right now.
Oh...Elizabeth, do not ask questions like that!

Yay...another story! Excellent beginning to this story! Ah...poor Rodney.. I can feel this pain! But now, he's to be thrown to the wolves!

Loved the story. It is so much easier to flush out characters in a story rather than in a TV show. You were able to give so much more emphasis and fallout for that episode than we were ever able to see. Always enjoy this storyline. These emotionally crippled men!

I saved all the chapters til after the Holidays so I could read them in peace. Once again you have provided a different adventure for the guys. I think they all need a few days on a beautiful planet with some down time to fix the rifts in the team, of course something will happen to push them all back together.

Throughly enjoyed this story. Loved the ending with Shepherd’s thoughts about forgiving.

Excellent story—excellent writing! I love that you stayed so canon—it really helped visualize all this as an episode! Love the inner conflicts...though they acknowledge the problems they’ve each created, there still seems to be a rift in the cohesiveness of the team...maybe time will heal the rifts—it would be great for you to weite a story that solidifies the total trust that is lacking! This team thrives on that total trust and that is what makes them so damned great! Again-excellent story—hope you go on to get this team back together completely! Hint, hint! Oh, heah—and Vance is still out there! Hmmmm—Sheppard needs closure too!