This sounds like a conversation Ed would have inside his head. It's also one of the things I liked about the anime: no romantic triangles, just Ed and Winry slowly realizing they love each other.

Awww. This was so cute!
We need more IC EdWin fanfics in the FMA fandom!
And I do love to see a Medieval EdWin AU! That would be very interesting!

This is such a sweet and wholesome story. There can never be enough Edwin content- it's such a lovely ship and they're both such wonderful characters. I think you've really captured Ed here and his feelings for Winry.
I'd love to see both of those AUs!

This is really sweet. I love Ed and Winry and this is such clean and pure writing. It's the kind of Edwin content I live for!
I'm sorry Kraytas thinks it's appropriate to attack you. They've done the same thing to various writers, ripping into their work in defense of that awful abuse fantasy fic. I hope you blocked them.

To whomever it may concern, Kraytas has sent harrassment messages to authors several times.
The reason: they're angry at people who have expressed distaste/digust towards the author of rape and abuse fantasy fics (of Edward Elric- so a child no less.)
To Skyler's Book, this is clean and wholesome writing. It's so innocent and I adore it. I would definitely be interested in reading a medieval AU!

Kraytas has been attacking several authors. Ignore them.
This is a lovely story. You shouldn't be at all ashamed of this. It's such a beautiful tribute to a beautiful couple.

Hey Kraytas, no one cares.
Stop trying to recruit people in your rape fantasy fics.
Go report yourself to the cops or something, you nasty sicko

Your writing is ass please stop.

I really enjoyed this story! Thanks for writing it.

Absolutely beautiful and warming. Such a touching story. EdxWin for life!

Wow this is he first fma I’ve ever read and it’s beautiful! Rlly like how you wrote Ed, captured his personality perfectly, and the story feels like smth official, very real.

Great story. However, isn't Ed already engaged with Winery at this point in the universe...remember the train scene? And Al in a relationship with the princess? Although it's only hinted at in the family photo? Just found the inconsistency odd.

Yes, you're right. We need more EdWin content. It's the best ship in the world.
And I love the hint at AlMei.
This was very in character and sweet.

I love how in-character Ed and Al are! (Al would totally fuss all over his hair like that...)

This was so cute! I so agree to you about Winry being the only person I can see Ed attracted to. I adored how you wrote about his protectiveness towards her- that's so canon considering how he acted whenever she was in danger. And it's so sweet here.
This pairing has completely stolen my heart. I didn't think I would write romance for FMA, but then came along EdWin proving me wrong. And I look forward to seeing the AUs you have planned.