Reviews for In Need of Polish
tokyo tea chapter 50 . 7/24
i've had this idea for awhile what if lil'loyd and the ninja are invited to meet the royal family and in order to help keep little princess harumi safe lil'loyd and her have weekly play dates and because for that lil'loyd is able to help harumi greive and learn to love again, TIDR show harumi joins the lil'terrors
Fiiiyaaah chapter 50 . 7/20
*Happy sigh* This was the perfect ending. The part where Borg adopted Skylor was so sweet, and I thought it was hilarious how everyone still thinks she's from space and her "confirming" it, and Borg's reaction to the whole thing. (I absolutely loved the chapter where Kai took her out for her birthday and they played laser tag with Garmadon!) This has been an amazing story, and I can't wait for the next one!
Kay Hau chapter 50 . 7/18
HOORAY! CONGRATULATIONS! A fantastic epilogue to a fantastic story! Great job! And oooh, so excited for One Heck of a Wedding! Though I'm a little surprised how many others seem to be guessing it's a Skybound fic, nope! Much, much better than that! I can't wait! Let me say it's something we've ALL been waiting for, you just didn't know it!

It was nice Skylor got some introspection time. She REALLY needed it after everything! And it was so sweet seeing Nya, Kai, and Pixal making a special effort to visit and comfort her. And then Pixal and Borg's decision to welcome her into their family, wow! That whole scene outside the hospital was just so beautiful! They're going to be so happy together, and it's actually a huge relief that poor Skylor's not gonna be struggling alone trying to run some noodle shop when she should be going to school and being a teenager! Plus the whole Samurai Sisters dynamic between Pixal and Skylor is just SO COOL!

I can't stop smiling thinking about Zen Zane and Rusty Echo finally having their upgrades! Rusty's just so cute, being so excited about his arms not falling off and the like, and Zen's actually very cute too, with his old man "wow, that felt good!" Lol! Also, Pixal and Zen get my favorite Ninjago romantic line, their precious "Are we compatible now?" Takes me right back to that sparkling happy feeling when watching that particular episode the first time! It was also really nice, even if a bit sad, seeing the resolution of the Nick Jay and Red Nya arc, though it's really great that this time around Nick Jay's got his best friend at his side through all this stress. Thanks to that, he actually was able to work through the crazy and finally come to a mature decision to respect Red Nya and her choice, whatever it may end up being. So proud of him! And it's pretty funny that he still seems to think that Nya's 'perfect match' was Pythor, lol!

And the finale of the finale! The final scene! Setting the stage with Lord Garmadon lounging around in his pj's in front of his tv munching cereal is just perfect, and love the reminder that he was actually supposed to be under house arrest this ENTIRE time! Lol, I'd forgotten! Very cool seeing the press conference and getting a little glimpse into the future of the show verse with the return of Borg and his two daughters! LOVE how the rumor/conspiracy mill managed to end up that common knowledge dictates all THREE of them are aliens! Skylor's going to have so much fun with that! Pixal's totally just going to go with it, and poor Borg won't be able to deny it because he has no idea where the idea came from or how to even reply to such a thing!

You're very welcome, and thank YOU so much for letting me be your beta! It was so much fun, and I'm so glad I was able to help! Looking forward to those Greener Pastures fics, and then eventually the Wedding of the Century~!
BlendedInBlack chapter 50 . 7/18
Yay! The grand finale! I can't wait till the sequel of this!
Even though I'm not quite satisfied with the fact that Kai and Skylor didn't get together, I guess maybe it'll be covered in the sequel..
But ONE HECK OF A WEDDING ? I wonder who's wedding we're talking about here...
Harley Allison24 chapter 50 . 7/18
"Practicing screams with happiness in the background"

Ok, I've calmed down. But, seriously! Having Borg adopt Skylor is one of the most brilliant things I've ever seen in Ninjago fanfiction! Its just awesome! Borg will be a amazing Dad for her and she will finally get the love and care that she deserves!

I'm glad Jay has matured since the beginning of this. Having a guy willing to wait for you is almost always one of the cutest things in fiction and this is no different. I think it shows his growth as a character and I'm happy for him.

Garmadon. Bro, you crack me up every time I see you and I can't wait until you get remarried! I'm so happy! Though it wouldn't be a ninjago fic if there wasn't a villain and I sure hope that Morro(Or any other villain) doesn't ruin it. Or maybe I do because I want to see you and Koko kick some ghost butt. (You never know. XP)

Great ending and I loved the book over all! I am waiting anxiously(As everyone else is) for the next book! I'm so excited!
Kifo Entiegon chapter 50 . 7/17
This was a good story. I'm sad to see it finished, but I know that the next story will be awesome. Wonder what adventure that's going to bring. But I have to ask, will we get side stories about the boys getting the Nya test? Especially an explanation on how Cole managed to know more about the test than the others?
Watcher321 chapter 50 . 7/17
WOW! What a ride! :D that was SO good, and this is such an awesome series! way to go for another milestone ;)
ItsYoGreenGirl chapter 50 . 7/17
I’m so glad that Skylors okay. Well, not okay okay, but she’s on the road to recovery and Chen’s behind bars. So in all honestly I think she’ll be okay.

Oh no, someone please just like adopt Skylor or something? Nya I know you can probably forge Chen’s signature, though would they really need it?

Pythor if you crawl out of the woodworks to start some more drama ima kick your butt.

AW YES! Borg yes!

Oooooo! “You want me?” Skylor you just broke me heart into a million pieces. As if the Lloyds weren’t enough, now I’ve gotta worry about you making me cry all over the place.

Oh the Nya test! Yay you’ve both passed! Invite me to the weddings!

“I’ve been judging him since the day we were born,” Haha!

Oh the show!ninja! And oh my gosh you two amazing nindroids finally got your upgrades! Oh Echo! Yay!

I will always be a sucker for “Are we compatible now?” I just love that line so much even though it broke me heart when I heard it for the first time lol.

Oh no Jay!

Oh wait Lee...OHHH LEE! The guy that Jay interrogated! OO YAY HE GOT THE GIRL HAHA!

Aw, jay, I’m sure Nya will come around. I’m sure.

Oh haha! The whole space princess thing! From when Kai and Skylor ditch school to set up her birthday party! Haha! Keep the mystery going Skylor yes!

I’m glad Pixal is finally coming out of hiding, and that she can finally show her nindroidness without having to fear a crime boss coming after her and her father.

Lol they are totally from space.

Yay they ninja can talk from their own dimensions! I need some group chat shenanigans!

AHHH! The ending! I’m in tears! *chef kiss* It couldn’t have ended on a higher note! Thank you for this incredible story and it was an absolute pleasure to read this!
Carrie2sky chapter 50 . 7/17
What a great ending! I like happy endings! Echo is as good as new, Skylor is adopted by Borg-I didn't except that, but it's a nice touch, and Jay is going to wait for Nya. How awesome is that?

I loved the cameo at the end with Garmadon and him watching "Good Morning Ninjago." That was really funny. And Gary finally made a communication device that will work between dimensions. A little late, but better late than never. I'm sure it will come in handy in the sequel.

A great read! You and Kay Hau did very well!

Until next time! I look forward to Greener Pastures.
Luna Lillyth chapter 50 . 7/17
Lovely wrap up for everything.
Queen of Camouflage chapter 50 . 7/17
And so concludes another beautiful story. Not gonna lie, teared up a little at Borg telling Skylor he wanted to adopt her. The heart to heart between Jay and Cole was beautiful, and I'm really proud of Jay. "One Heck of a Wedding", huh? Excuse me while i start making a list of theories. Sorry big hero 6 the series, your theories are going on hold for a while. As I've gushed before, i absolutely love the journey that Skylor's character has been on, and her development is just something special. Your writing is fantastic, and it's probably the greatest fanfiction I've ever read. Actually, "The Grass is always Greener" is the first fanfiction i ever read. It's what got me into fanfiction as a whole. Your writing inspired me to start sharing my ideas with people, and start writing them down. I actually have a cool idea for an AU, where Kai is the Police commissioner of Ninjago City and The Green Ninja is a mysterious Vigilante. If i can ever figure out HOW TO UPLOAD TO THE DANG SITE, maybe I'll start writing it! I hightly anticipate anything you write in the future, and can't wait.
Sincerely, Queen of Camouflage.
Guest chapter 50 . 7/17
YESSS! I WANTED SKYLOR TO BE ADOPTED! I’m sooooooo happy that Borg did it! Now SKYLOR and Pixal are sisters. Aggggghhhh! I loved this! I can’t wait for more!
CheezPretzel chapter 50 . 7/17
One heck of a wedding... Hmmm... SKYBOUND?
Squidzi Galaxi chapter 50 . 7/17
'loud trumpet sounds' YOU DID IT! YOU FINISHED THIS STORY! YAAAAAAAAAYYYY!
Guest chapter 50 . 7/17
Oh no, It's Nadakhan.
(Looking for to One Heck of a Wedding! Your fics are top notch!)
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