Glad to see Haruna... and they seem awfully suspicious about the gold.

I like gold.

Steam sales, the bane of all good writers existence yeah me too I spend my days lookin at the steam store and I bought Shogun fall of the samurai, Napoleon total war, and darkest dungeon, ah steam store sales...

Anyway is Tywin having a suspicion with the Kirino? He seems on to something maybe just my imagination, since this is too good that I expect some twist in the end.

Its short but good.

I was reading back your 1st fanfic of "An Arpeggio of Ice and Fire" chapter 10, it's when House Kirino was making a banner. There was a part where Tyrion asked what is House Kirino's saying, if House Stark uses "Winter is coming" I suggest we have House Kirino use "The tide is rising" or "the waves are coming", I just brought this up since House Kirino is not yet using any house saying...

Is her forcefield really that weak?

Chibi arya is adorable

I like Luwin.

Arya is happy. That is nice.

So, I'm hoping to see King Landings reaction to Super Battleship Yamato. I would also love to see the Iron Borns reaction to such a ships cannons.

Perhaps you can somehow work this in.

Super Battleship Yamato is on it's way to get to Kings landing. Tywin, Robert amd Cersei decide to see it arrive safely, believing they are needed. They are transported by one of the Kings ships. When the Iron borns attack in retaliation for Yaras capture, Lady Yamato decides she doesn't want to be late in arriving to Kings landing. So she blows them out of the water and rams they're flagship. All while explaining that she was irritated with these buffoons. Both Tywin and Robert share a terrified look.

Cersei is impressed by the female power being shown and changes her mind on House Kino.

I would also love to see where Daenerys learns of the steel ships in Westeros. Perhaps this forces her into gaining even more forces. like some from Ying Ti. Or another place farther east. Or even those three citys sitting in the bone mountains that have amazon women.

Just my random thoughts for you.

I'm confused. Are all members of the House Kirino female? I have not seen anyone point it out.

neat

Don't get me wrong, it was well-written, but I'd like to see the plot advance a bit more.

It's been a while since I read all of the previous chapters and the previous story, so I forget if this was already addressed, but isn't anyone suspicious that the 'House Kirino' is 100% women without a single man?

That should seem odd from an outside perspective.

i really hope Jon ends with one of them