I can imagine Luan may not have taken any actual dancing lessons, but probably at least familiarized herself with some basic moves (most likely ballet) to help improve her flexibility for pantomiming and physical comedy, so I wouldn't be surprised if she was actually a smooth mover on the dance floor. A lot of professional athletes also take ballet lessons for the same purpose, so I wouldn't be surprised if even Lynn secretly did the same thing (I say secretly because, of course, she wouldn't want people to catch her doing "frou-frou" things like plies or piroettes - it'd ruin her street cred). And yeah, isn't it odd that dancing isn't Sam's thing? Of all the things we've learned about her in "Racing Hearts," that one actually makes very little sense!

But, anyway, this entry was a great little "side-quel" in your series, and I really look forward to whatever continuation you have in store for us, because nobody writes Luna and Luan in fanfiction better than you - I mean that!

Very nice!

Wow; for once, Leni's brain actually functioned somewhat properly! But I enjoyed how both Luna and Luan were initially upset with Leni's seemingly callous and insensitive remark, but she really did have a point. Yeah, I love that both Luna and Luan bought the bracelet for the other in their favorite color, but Leni's right: by Luna keeping the yellow one, and Luan keeping the purple one, they'll be keeping a little piece of their favorite sister with them all the time, even when the other is not around.

Great stuff with the reminiscing. Anticipating what comes next.

Ah, so now we're seeing Luna's side of the this saga; excellent. Nice to get her own perspective on her siblings, as well as the reactions from Sam and Stuart... I mean, hey, they just don't know Luna's sibs the way we all do, lol.

And since Luna brought it up again, is there any chance that one fine day, in the future, we may actually be treated to a flashback of the momentous occasion where a young Luna was old enough to realize that not only is she Luan's big sister, but that Luan was her FIRST little sister? It'd be super cute to see it how it all unfolded, since she's so proud about it.

Looking forward to more!

I was hoping you would resume that flashback!
You certainly have a flare for writing about people's feelings. Keep it up!

Beautiful