Please update soon

Hmmmm… well, from what I've seen so far, Jasmine's inner thoughts are pretty good, sad she's forcing Sora into a life of marriage, but still, she'll understand that she and Sora love each other and would be more than willing to protect each other should the timing be right...

Though now I wonder about that portal... hmmm...

Keep up the good work!

Short but sweet! So far, so good! Jasmine is really considerate here to Sora, but it seems that she needs to see the bright side of things instead of the negative aspects. And it seems that she was going to get her chance to talk to him... when a portal opens up that brings them to what I believe is an adventure of a life time!

Keep it up!

Whoo! Now this was excellent!

Sora saves the fair and empathetic Sadira, and the two get to know one another well before the arrival of Prince Achmed. Sora needs to give himself a little bit more credit where it concerns him and the princess, as Jasmine shows wonderfully here that she chooses a true friend over an over-pompous fool like Achmed!

Again, this was short but very much sweet and needed! Keep it up!

Hey, just caught up with your story! Sorry it took so long...

I have to say, the start of the story is pretty good so far, with Sora and young Jasmine meeting, to Jafar trying to easily manipulate Sora in his own ways, to Sora and Jasmine happily growing up together...

Good work on the start so far! If you want any more ideas, PM me, and I'll be happy to give you some more!

And I eagerly await the next chapter to the story!

God, this concept is like a breath of fresh air, I love it! I can't wait to see where this goes!

Huh and here I thought that Aladdin wouldn't even be in this story. Please do the market chase scene next chapter and have botj Aladdin and Sora meet each other because I bet that will be entertaining.

Short but again cool! Time has aged and matured both Sora and Jasmine, growing up together but now it seems that certain things are trying to tear them apart. Jafar does try to help, but again Sora shows his mature side by not taking it & considering Jasmine's feelings.

And now it seems that the introduction of a certain street right is now coming up! Interesting... Keep it up!

Good chapter.

Short but very interesting. Sora gets an interesting wake-up call, learns about the Key Bearers and now is being introduced by Jafar in a way that is quite unusual but original. And it seems that Jafar is still quite cunning as he has hooked Sora on now something interesting. Heh, reminds me of the original Scar from the REAL animated movie "The Lion King".

Excellent work! Keep it up!

Short but good chapter.

A good start to a good story! And thank you for the explanation of the children's book that inspired you which intrigues me.

Sora manages to get the Keyblade early, and uses it to unlock the secret door underneath the island. I believe that when he passed through the door, the immense energy from crossing over into a new realm scrambled his memories. And who knows what else it could have affected him.

In any case, he manages to save Jasmine from an immense Heartless and gains a lovely friend in the process! Jafar is moved by the words from the Mistress of All Evil to ally himself to her, and despite all of his cunning... he is easily manipulated when it comes to offers of power. And nice work on the background of said bad guy! Very nice touch!

I cannot wait to see on what happens next! Keep it up!

A pretty good start but please actually finish this fanfiction because you seem to have a really bad habit of stopping about halfway through your stories.

Interesting intro