Reviews for Chivalry
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 26 . 7/23
Cliffhanger successful you dang heartstring tugger!
DarkHazen chapter 26 . 7/18
Your writing is getting better and better, Gorsouul! And you definitely succeeded with that cliffhanger! Just when things start to get exciting too! XD
Kudos!
DT610 chapter 26 . 7/18
Yo... harsh cliffhanger! In all seriousness, it's nice to see the progression that Weiss has had in the last couple chapters, with her beginning to get over at least some of the issues that she's been dealing with. Loving the story so far, keep up on the great work.
On a random side note, I hope that the way that Ruby meets Winter and Qrow meets Weiss is kept the same, because that whole interaction was hilarious in the show, and the relationship would be a fun thing to add to that moment. Looking forward to the next update
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 26 . 7/17
Oh dear, seems Weiss has a little kink and perhaps Ruby does too going by what she said.

Weiss is becoming more and more open and accepting of her wants and desires, so good on her for overcoming her own fears and insecurities.
edgelordXD chapter 26 . 7/17
Wonderful! The cliffhanger leaves me wanting so much more!
IanAlphaAxel chapter 26 . 7/17
:)
1inamillionco chapter 25 . 7/15
My god! What a read what a brilliant wonderful heart warming and wrenching piece of art!
edgelordXD chapter 25 . 7/9
I love this chapter! It's so interesting to watch these characters and their relationship develop. Keep up the good work!
DarkHazen chapter 25 . 7/8
Loved this chapter! Definitely liked seeing Weiss being more assertive here. Massive cuteness from both sides! And the scene with Yang was hilarious lol! Kudos!
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 25 . 7/7
They are so adorable.

Anyway, enjoyed this a lot. Weiss has really grown since the start of this and Ruby has matured a fair bit as well.

Look forward to next chapter.
conkerkos chapter 25 . 7/7
3 :)
Bucky1016 chapter 24 . 7/6
Ah, Gorsouul my friend! It really is good to see you again! I hope this review finds you well and safe. It's been too long since we (my wife and I) have last read your amazing work, and for a while we were worried about you. We hoped that you were alright, and I am sorry to hear you went through a rough time there. Aurora says to tell you Hello, and that we both are glad to have you back with us! In fact, Aurora has talked me into writing a bit of Fanfiction myself, and so far we've had over 400 pages compiled ocer the last year now! If I get the chance, I might even be able to post it sometime. For now, I must return to work. Enjoy your day wherever you are, and may your sword stay sharp, and your wits even sharper!
The Keeper of Worlds chapter 24 . 6/26
My feels are always in heaven with this story!
Rioux 40 chapter 24 . 6/22
Very good. It is nice to see Weiss dealing with her neglect in a positive way.
Murkglow chapter 2 . 6/22
Finally getting the time to re-read this story now that it's being re-uploaded (and edited) and I just wanted to say again that I appreciate that you're putting the story back up again. It truly is one of my favorite stories on this entire site and easily my favorite RWBY story. Thank you for sharing it with us all over again.

I don't have too much to say for these first few chapters other than to repeat a bit I said the first time I commented on it: I really like that the story starts with Ruby and Weiss already in their relationship. I 100% understand and agree with you that it's a complete shame that most stories end just as the characters become a couple. The growth that comes after (as I know it does in this story) is IMO far more interesting than the "will they/won't they" or angsty missteps so many other stories choose to focus on. And of course the absolute fluffy adorableness that this story never fails to deliver on.
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