Reviews for Moon Tide |
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DarkRain4Eternity chapter 8 . 7/10 such an amazimg story pls continue this story and update soon |
naruto chapter 8 . 1/28 great story so far keep it up |
angeldunn1993 chapter 8 . 1/12 I can't wait for you to write more |
avatoa chapter 6 . 1/5 Ok, where to start. First off, Luffy’s home island is in the East Blue, not the Grand Line and wouldn’t need a log pose to reach it. Second, the island is called the Goa Kingdom, not Fushia Island. Luffy’s home town is called Foosha Village however. Third, how the heck did she survive, even as a ninja, the entire trip from Kureha’s home in Drum Kingdom in the Grand Line to Luffy’s home in the East Blue? Sorry for the tone, but you gotta admit there is a big hole in your story right now and there may be others who use much worse language to comment on this story. Just trying to be helpful. |
rockobrocko chapter 1 . 1/5 Interesting so far keep it up. |