Reviews for Jaune Arc, Lord of Hunger
Greer123 chapter 13 . 7/16
The lord of Hunger has started to lead Jaune down the path of the Darkside and with it the path of a true Sith Lord. Something tells me that Jaune's family will hardly recognize him when they see him again.
Guest chapter 1 . 7/14
Will he be like Darth Nihilus?
Guest chapter 13 . 7/13
Is Jaune gonna wear the Mask of Darth Nihilus?
some kind of fan 22 chapter 13 . 7/14
i cant wait for jaune to officially join the dark side
MM Browsing chapter 12 . 7/11
i like the comment BostonLights and i also like the idea that jaune overcome the dark side and become the grey jedi
one plot could be like when is about the choke the white fang to death ruby was the one that convince jaune to let go with her silver eye purge out the grimm essence out of his body

afterword the teacher like glynda warn jaune not the eat grimm for fear he might become one

when will jaune going to do the Force Whirlwind, during the breach with so many grimm i though it would be one of the best time to use it

i wonder if nora gain some power of the force after she absorb jaune lightning force.
Axccel chapter 13 . 7/10
I think Jaune’s innate good nature and care for others can anchor him. A Darth, sure, but one who isn’t crazy and needlessly cruel.
Lord Asmodeus chapter 13 . 7/10
Good, good. Corruption is wonderful. Especially Dark Side corruption - it's exquisite. I hope Jaune truly grows into a worthy Dark Lord. Maybe eventually destroying the entire world of the Remnant. That would be tragic, but wonderful.
SuperKamiEdgeLord chapter 13 . 7/9
Holy crap! I thought the era of good SW x RWBY crossovers was over, but here you and “Maul’s Empire” are proving me wrong!

It’s super fun to see Jaune gain and learn each new power, but him getting both Lightning and Drain and then ham was incredible! Loved the Sith eyes; been waiting for that to happen and the pay off couldn’t have been better!

Jaune using mind tricks so casually after being so torn up the previous day was a wonderful way of showing the change in mentality that immersing one’s self in the dark side can yield. I always like how, in the ROTS novel, the author described that power high as being like a dream or an out-of-body experience: the person know what’s happening, but every thing seems so *easy* that they forget to control themselves or even ask if what they’re doing is right because they can just whatever they want. Anakin wants to beat Dooku? Boom, done. Jaune wants to save his friends? Boom, done.

Can’t wait to see how teams RWBY, NPR, and especially CMEN ( I swear that’s the actual name!) react to his newfound atititude and power!
MM Browsing chapter 13 . 7/9
i being wondering what would happen if ruby use her silver eye on jaune
will he purge the dark force and the grimm essence out of jaune

will his aura/semblance balance out with his dark force
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 6 . 7/9
This was awesome! For all his talk, Cardin really must be weak-minded if he can fall for Mind Tricks so easily! Lol. But then again, I doubt anyone could when it comes to the Force on Remnant! Lol.
BostonLights chapter 13 . 7/9
Thanks for responding to my review! Your the first author to ever do that for me. What I really wanted to say was while yes, Jaune's taste for being the hero is gonna eventually lead to him embracing the Dark Side like you said Anakin Skywalker virtually died and Vader took his place it's the same for Jaune I assume. At least I do I love this story btw. But is he gonna have a "redemption arc" I would love him to basically become a Mace Windu. Remember Master Windu uses the dark side of the force More than once but he came back to the light and faced his redemption arc as well and eventually became a Jedi Knight and Jedi Master. Qui-Gon Jinn was eventually a "Grey Jedi" to the order and the Sith feared him for a long time. I would love to see Jaune become something of a mixture of the two aforementioned people. Does Jaune come back from the darkness that he has dragged himself in to. The world can only know Fellow readers the world can only know. AgIn love this story.
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 5 . 7/8
Oy vey! Yang, Yang, Yang you naughty girl! I can only fathom a guess on how Ruby’s naïveté hasn’t broken with her step-sister’s prudish innuendos! *sigh*

Anyway, good work! Loved the Mind Trick there!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 4 . 7/8
Interesting...Jaune’s first taste of the Dark Side’s power! Will he attempt to use its intoxicating abilities once more and fall? Or will he find a way to make this all work out in his favor? Hmm...
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 3 . 7/8
Hot dawg! Awesome chapter!
Antex-The Legendary Zoroark chapter 2 . 7/8
This is off to a good start!
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