Reviews for the journey of a Vampire to another 2wei dimension: Young Justice |
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wallker chapter 4 . 3/9 mystic should pay a short visit and terrify the lex a little or use his influence as an ancestor to fail or diminish lex's wealth |
joshiro99 chapter 2 . 2/5 I recommend you get a Beta reader as sometimes I get lost trying to figure out who's talking and when it's speech or thoughts. Also I find your wording to be incorrect for what you're meaning to say half the time. |
Jackejsh chapter 3 . 2/4 Bad, your English is |
DieMongrel chapter 2 . 2/1 not a native English speaker are you |
Theinzmann111 chapter 1 . 1/13 I think you might want to have a beta reader fix all this, the descriptions are good, the the conversation between characters gets jumbled to nonsense. |
Guest chapter 2 . 1/10 intresting |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/2 Seems very inteesting! |