Reviews for Sagittarius
Guest chapter 13 . 5/3
So, you make Ibaraki a Servant in the war, and then don't use her in the story. That's a mean tease man. There's like, eight stories that actually even have Ibaraki out of the roughly 1000 I've searched through. And of those eight, only three of them don't either kill her off immediately, kill her off after a chapter, or give her two or three lines before she stops mattering.

Otherwise it's a nice read, but that's kinda a gut punch.
Yagami Kuzuki chapter 27 . 3/21
Your story is to focus on and rushed on fate character , need a beta to help you , im out see ya
Frostlash chapter 1 . 3/21
I enjoy how you choreograph fight sense I know it won't happen but I can see you portraying Quetzalcoatl and Jaguar man in this amazingly [ been binjing Fate Grand Order Absolute Demonic Battlefront: Babylonia and besides Enkidu who i have seen beforehand Quetzal is my favorite.] if there is more I WILL BE HEAR.
Theinzmann111 chapter 27 . 3/20
Wouldn’t the story in my hero academia (sadly) go off track without all for one in it?
Frostlash chapter 26 . 3/19
As absurd as it is to say jenist servyed this inconter. I enjoyed that you gave the other heros a chans to shine more so then thay did in cannon. I look forwerd to all future updates and to see how the story shift with the inclution of servents especially the yakusa rade if you go that wating for Tsuyu to brade Alstolo's hair I think it would be a calm sean after all the termoyl class 1A has been through.
framfrit chapter 26 . 3/19
You know you should probably avoid mentioning Apocrypha extra material as it states the np transfer is normally impossible but worked because alstolfo had a legend of receiving help and items while the shield had one of being given. Additionally, karna's flames don't come from his lance but his prana burst (fire) skill.
Frostlash chapter 25 . 3/15
Tbo I was hoping to see the offensive mode of the sheald but still grate to see it. [ Their are so meny ways to die] time to see how AFO shall meat his end.[ love quoting Kindred] Hope Chiron can get Ragdolls quick back she is too nice and jentil to be sad.
Frostlash chapter 23 . 3/11
gods please no not Karna's lance . He would be screaming in the throne of heros if he new a man like Endeavor [ even with his reality check ] was using hes lance. I can see how it makes sense despite my chagrin.
Frostlash chapter 24 . 3/13
May AFO rot in Tartarus the the underworld not the prison. could magic heal All Might's wound because shirly with Cirons conetions with mages he could get it dun. The age of the wound is the only mager problem I see.
Frostlash chapter 22 . 3/6
I thought presens conselment was the assassin classes mane skill and all had it like how all berserkers had mad inhansment, sabers magic resistance, riders well riding, achers indipendit action, casters magic regeneration, and lansers E ranked luck. That last one being a joke but still. As for postponing the attack on the camp their is more to the world then just classe 1A next chapter will be an example of that. Good work as always looking forward to more and maybe we can “ see ” rider of red's sheald [I didn't want to spell his name from memory].
winterwolf23543 chapter 21 . 3/6
Aw~ poor mineta he just want to see tits lmao! heroes being a decent human being hahsahahahaha Kouta is naive he doesn't know the half of heroes graduated that escape from his anger
They have been trapped by astolfo lol, the reaction is kind of lackluster
Astolfo is like a self insert hmm...
Frostlash chapter 21 . 2/28
Gods it is about time that happened to meneta. I hope Ragdoll can be saved without losing her querk mybe have Alsofo or Gray their to help her. How strong is Gray's presents consealment. Good work as always.
Frostlash chapter 20 . 2/27
I can see Alstolfo getting the kota treatment that Izuku got in cannon which would be interesting to see how he reacts to it. The bath sean will be inlietening for all present if Alstolfo joins. RWBY animation improves after volume 3 if you want to give it a try.
sawtooth44 chapter 20 . 2/28
you did not check the video because theres PLENTY of VAs that crossover

Hans Chirsten Andersen, Ozymandias, Mephistopheles - Takehito Koyasu Dio Brando, DIO, Diego Brando
EMIYA - Suwabe Jun'ichi Abbacchio
Robin Hood - Toriumi Kousuke Guido Mista
Mordred - Sawashiro Miyuki Jolyne Cujoh
David - Nakamura Yuuichi Bruno Buccellati
Fionn mac Cumhaill(Finn McCool) - Miki Shinichirou Gyro Zeppeli
Waver Velvet - Namikawa Daisuke Giorno Giovanna
Merlin, Arthur(Prototype) - Sakurai Takahiro Kishibe Rohan
EMIYA (Assassin) - Koyama Rikiya Kira Yoshikage/Kawajiri Kosaku
King Hassan, Kirei Kotomine - Nakata Jouji Pucci
Sakamoto Ryoma - Kase Yasuyuki Funny Valentine)
Chen Gong - Madono Mitsuaki Gappy Higashikata
Add - Ono Daisuke Jotaro Kujo

some more but i dont know the VA's

- Iggy: Osakabehime
- Lisa Lisa: Medea, Carmilla, Jing Ke
- Wamuu: Iskandar
- Yukako: Altera, Brynhildr, Shishou, Fujinon
- Prosciutto, ASB/EOH Ghiaccio: Ashwatthama
- Bluford, Tiziano: Sigurd
- Erina: Artoria
- Young Joseph: Goetia
- Fungami Yuya: Mori Nagayoshi
- Trish: Serenity
PikaMew1288 chapter 9 . 2/22
Chiron should Maim All for One by removing his arms. His Quirk requires his hands to function so removing them will strip him of the ability to use it.
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