Just caught up and I have to say I thoroughly enjoy how you write this story. This story is a fantastic one and I look forward to seeing how Nero will take the news about Giorno possibly having a stand.

No grammatical errors, pacing is fantastic and characters are written well, feels like a true what if scenario if I have to be honest, kuddos.

Kudos!

I'm surprised someone else thought of the idea of Giorno joining La Squadra. Super curious how the story plays out

God damn it I forgot to review the last chapter, now I feel like crap.

After reviewing this chapter I have to say it's pretty good. Your pacing is good, grammar is pretty solid and overall I enjoyed the story immensely. There might be small error in the first paragraph in the beginning of the sentence, might be myself who is incorrect though.

You have a good grasp on Nero and the way you wrote his back story is similar to how I think Araki might have gone. Looking forward to more of my favorite minor antagonists group.

Good inspiration, good headcanon, great first chapter.

Just came across this interesting story and it looks promising.
Pacing is good, grammar could use a little work and looks thought out.

While it does have hints of another story I'm glad that your taking the frame of the story and put your own twist to it. I wonder that by having Nero adopt Giorno into the gang would that also change his outlook in life.

I look forward to reading more of this story and I wonder how part 5 would have gone if Giorno would have been raised by assassins. My guessing is that Sorbet and Gelato would still incur the wrath of Passione and be killed off, thereby starting La Squadra revenge against Passione. Here's hoping by having Giorno around they'll survive with some members intact.