keep going

This ought to be good. I think I'm going to like this story.

It needs a few tweaks here and there to further polish the chapter, however, imho.

This has potential

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Don't know if anyone's mentioned it to you, but Yen don't travel into the decimal place. You can either have ¥1 or ¥2, not ¥1.99.

Yes irrelevant I know, but I'm a nitpicker by nature.

Thank you for the read.

I like this.

good

A really unique and interesting take on this crossover section.

good start

Clearly some can't understand a story, characters and an excellent plot. I really like this story, if you are going to add food wars aspects that will be nice to see. Not sure how that would happen but uh, yeah..

Yikes if someone having a small crush on someone is setting up for "banging" already then I'm not sure what more intimate gestures would be setting up for.

Loved it!

Cool story so far.

I know the paring is Naruto x Yasaka which is good. But I was wondering if Naruto will eventually develop a small harem by adding Rossweisse and Kuroka? Because I think it could work well.

Will you also be using Food Wars stuff in here as well?

Can wait to see how this develops the plot.

interesting story so far looking forward to more
do feel sorry for issei the moment he perv's on naruto's wife

Well done... but I hate that Naruto did not slaughter or put the devils in their place.