Nigga where did the Pokémon come from?

I look forward to what you do with this and I hope you update it soon.

Well... Wasn't expecting a Hindi song... Lekin bhai koyi accha le leta

I have to say this is one of the most unique and creative ideas I have ever seen for a story. My only disappointment is that its so short. I'm looking forward to more updates.

I am looking foward to Chapter 8.

Great chapter xD Cant wait for more

Haha will this have pairing cause if so I'm totally in for Bran and Irene haha become erzas daddy ahhaa

Iam really enjoying naruto as a old man.. Its refreshing and I can't wait for more

Very nice story so far! :)

I look forward to chapter 4! :3

I love this story Asura please do continue with your updates I like the Old Man Naruto look too

I am getting confused with your grammar, in your other stories your grammar is fine, what is the problem now?

I'm confused about the plot for this like is this just a feel good type of story

Your grammar needs a bit of work, but it's not too bad

Naruto Erza's father?

Harem please