| Reviews for The Eclipse |
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  Guest chapter 12 . 6/30 Can you get Percy another sunspear, or something like oceanus's trident...? To replace the one he broke? can you? PLease And I am in love with this story man... this is one of the best Spartan Percy on fanfiction |
| Ian chapter 12 . 6/29 Please let this be Percy x Calypso! This site needs more of that pairing asap! Also great writing, keep it coming! |
 RandomFanAuthor chapter 12 . 6/27 Perseus fighting in Atlantis would be friggin awesome. And when Theseus gets rescued after the Princess Andromeda blows up, maybe Percy could convince Poseidon to let Theseus fight, just for a bit |
| Yesse2362 chapter 11 . 6/27 this review is for chapter 12 but because of whatever i cant post this so... its chapter 11 then idk if you actually plan to bring calypso and percy together in the end but i wouldnt have a problem with that great chapter as always. hope youll update again soon. its a bit sad that you havent really described the fight with kampe if i remember correctly. helios is a asshole btw see u hopefully soon Yesse |
| MigicTertle chapter 12 . 6/10 This is a great story and well written. I've read a good few stories based on the immortal Spartan Percy, but this has a really interesting take on the idea. Well done and keep up the good work! |
| HFelder03 chapter 12 . 6/9 This story is very interesting and I wonder how you will carry on. Will there be Pertemis? Perzoe? Keep it going! |
| A Huge Fan chapter 11 . 6/5 R u still updating lol? Ive really liked this book and your last. Pls dont stop ur a great author! |
| IDKHowToWritePlzHelp chapter 12 . 6/7 Take all the time you need. Your mental health is far more important than a chapter. We can wait |
| Yesse2362 chapter 12 . 6/7 thanks that you informed us about that :) im looking forward to read the next chapter |
| PJFanboy chapter 12 . 6/6 You can share your problems with me. The best part about this platform is that I will never know your identity and you won't know mine so you can share all you want. I will try to help, but if not possible, atleast you will have someone to talk to... |
| TatsuyaShiva4 chapter 12 . 6/6 Mhm really great Story. Maybe you could also write sometime a Story about Percy being either the Son of Erebus or Aither. Would be epic! Happy ur Back and hope everything is good again! |
| Falconfighter1427 chapter 12 . 6/6 I read this story one night got about half way then I went to sleep and lost the story I’m happy I finally found this amazing story again |
| Yess chapter 11 . 6/3 So far so nice Im not Apollo but I really think this book is awesome. I already read the books from Idkhowtowriteplzhelp and I really liked both of your books despite that it isn’t really a new idea but so far with a good twist. I hope that you update soon and Peace out Yesse2362 (Pm me there if you want sth) |
| Guest chapter 4 . 6/3 Obviously hitlers death and maybe like the events from assassins creed -» Caesar/Rome, France, Amerikan conquest Etc |
| Jaredkenway chapter 11 . 5/6 I can't wait for the next chapter! |
