Thank you so much for this story. It was so well-written and so in keeping with the world I feel Rowling created in her wonderful books. I particularly enjoyed your description, so evocative of place and feeling. Thank you.

I love this story! Thank you for your delightful insight into MM's family and history and relationships.

Beautiful

This was one of the most docile fics I have ever read. 3

I absolutely loved this. What a wonderful piece of writing. I never knew how much I needed this fic but I’m certainly glad you wrote it. I loved the way you wrote Robert, with his quiet musings and awe as he watched his daughter in her world. There was also so much sadness in it, so much regret. Truly a beautiful piece of writing. I hope you write more very soon!

This was beautiful to read! You're a really talented writer :)

This whole story is just so well written. Really well done with the Reverend, Minerva, and Snape.

I loved meeting Robert Mcgonagall. Minerva's Pottermore background feels detached from canon most of the time... so it's great that you gave life to some part of it. As always the way you deliver information and perspective is marvelous, witty and fitting. Also the characterisation is nicely done. Its heartwarming to follow Roberts thoughts and feelings as he comes to know Minerva's world and life and gradually loses his fear of it. Especially loved the last chapter in this little installment.

Wonderful story. It's good to know that you're still in the game. I treasure it x

This was so heartwarming and well written. Loved your characterizations.

Snape and Minerva are hilarious here.

Some confusing bits in this chapter to me, but I would like to just mention, not that Robert isn't cynical or jaded, or even suffering from dementia, but I would expect a pastor to know the Bible, and the Bible specifically states in numerous scriptures that prayer is paramount in the events of people's lives, including death. OK, I'll shut up now while you throw things at me. :P I will have to read this somewhere else where I can leave a much more detailed review - too much fun in here for me to just say 'Yay, its nice'. I love that you are writing HP again. ;)

Well well well. *grins* Looks like I've got some reading to do!

Good one. Followed, and the author favorited. Looking forward to your next on this, and to reading your others.

"That's preposterous!" Yup, it sure is, it's a silly, silly game. :-)

Love this story, lovely dialogue and interactions, and I love meeting Reverend Robert.