Great work on this chapter.

First thing first, Mirai revealing to the cast the origin of their universe was a surprising alright.

And I find the Fae lore of this universe interesting, the material is good for a standalone story.

I mean the logic behind why jaune will mostly end up a girl males sense. Also the fact that my favorite Biggs bunny shtick is the rabbit with lipstick thing might be a reason it did not get a rise out of me ... the potential for humor from it is awsome from the schadenfreude of a charater like qrow,Neptune and summer having to be told the women on screen he’s drooling over is a guy in their world having them be wireded out to potentially having a character like Ilya be like “ok I’m ready to move on from blake” just to yell to the universe From the girl causing this having the equipment she dislikes in her universe.

Hmm... how about Dark Soul lore? Why you asked? Because it’s DARK, duh! Great job.

Dam that is one dark reality. Must be very soul crushing for them that they learn they are fictional characters

I'm not hating the story but I'm getting really tired of him becoming she or he was actually she all along. The story is good no doubt about that but after a while, it kinda gets annoying and confusing as it goes on.

Her? Are we gonna see a lot of fem jaunes? Id this a fixation?

Whoa boy, not only was that long, but a little bit scary as well. I hope you're doing okay with the crazy shit going around, and I hope it doesn't dampen your inspiration.

Hope to see you post another chapter soon! Later!

Great work on this chapter.

Speaking of looking up informations, I actually did that and discovered Hollow Knight through your story. The game has an interesting plot.
To be honest before the mention of the Dream Nail I was quite lost about this universe, but you did amazingly well in describing what was what for a newcomer.

Also, about the Bleed Over, it's a really interesting mechanic. I'm curious to see what else can happen with it.

Anyhow, Glynda and Ozpin are here!
It's awesome, I look forward for the next update!

Not a bad start so far. And I haven't read the other two chapters yet. If you want new ideas, you can talk to me via PM. Until then, I'll continue reading this.

Nice job on the Chapter. This one was based off of Hollow Knight, with Jaune becoming Hornet and his/her companion being Knight. Nice job, and I also have a request for next chapter. It’s similar to this one, only Jaune stays male and becomes Kamen Rider Eternal (Blue Flare) rather than becoming female and Hornet. If you’re wonder who Kamen Rider Eternal is, look him up on Google, Bing, or any other provider.

Well this chapter got my mind worked up but in the end I understood everything by the end of the chapter but the female jaune...(which I still not get)
Even after that I congratulate you on writing this chapter and you have my sincerest thanks by me for writing something about Hollow Knight one of my favourite games ever so perfectly In my opinion because the feelings that I felt at reading the hollow knight part were the almost the exact same as the ones I got by playing the game.
Hope you continue to write this fic and that you will have a happy and healthy life.

I'll be honest I didnt like this chapter I tried to read it then decided to say fuck it and skipped through and I'll be completely honest I'm kinda glad lol. Hmm Idk tho I'm reading this at 3:43 am soooo

Well goes to show how truly ugly a person can be when it happens.

huh ok? But why change jaunes gender each time? I know he was inspired by the saint girl. But dosent it make a bad impersion if he keep changing his gender?

what the fuck did I just read?