amazing story loved it thank you
i hope you continue with it.

So intense but awesome! I wish that there more!

This story has a lot of possibilities, I would love to read more.

Thanks for an amazing update. Both fighting their own demons. One or two more chapters and the store for me would have been completed.

Wish you would continue it

A fantastic story. I had forgotten about this one. More like this story please.

Nooooooo! I want at least another chapter

Wow don't quit your day job this is dumb it doesn't even make any sense

Love, love love this Ana or should I say Annie get your gun hope you continue thankyou

Now because they’ve only revealed part of their backstories, I want to know more about them. Was there a link from their past? maybe. maybe not.

That was so cute. Maybe a time jump with them being together and subbing for each other

Would like to read more, good take two practicing dominants but Ana is stronger than Christian when face with a gun. Came from both disturbing environments. How about each of them alternately subbing for each other since they only practice for relieving their tensions due to work and have them start a more meaningful relationship too. Just a quirky idea and I am for monogamous sexual relationships and happy endings. Thanks.

Thanks for the very good read as always.

How do you manage to come up with these interesting story lines? This can be up there with 24 and the elite bachelor.

I hope you continue with the story. I like the different Christian