Reviews for Ace Cream
Ass chapter 3 . 7/21
Im still waiting for next time
Fiction Realm chapter 3 . 6/7
May I do a lemon based on this story
guest chapter 3 . 3/8
this was such a good chapter. the intro was hilarious and each of the characters felt real to me. I honestly laughed at the part where he pulled out the cards that said that he was their daddy. He obviously learned that trick from Luan. and speaking of, I'm looking forward to the sequel to this story since it seems that each girl will have their chance to fall for him. I just hope its more of the romance than sex, I like fluff more than lemon I guess.
guest chapter 2 . 3/8
Awe, that was such a nice chapter. I really felt the love between them. can't wait to read the next chapter.
guest chapter 1 . 3/8
good story.
Fox-McLoud501 chapter 3 . 3/3
This was such a good chapter. And I can't wait for the next story. keep up the good work.
The Siege Perilous chapter 3 . 3/3
Really glad to see you were able to wrap up this story the way you wanted to. It was a cute little romantic romp between three of my favorite characters, and I was very happy to see they managed to end up together. I'm eagerly looking forward to a sequel, and to see how things pan out with the new additions you've hinted at.

I'd also like to take a moment to reassure concerned readers that catspats31 shouldn't be taken seriously. The portion of the content guidelines that he's cited states that ffnet's policy is that they don't ACCEPT stories with explicit content. This is demonstrably false, as ffnet accepts explicit stories every time a story like this one gets posted. Which, on this site happens roughly every five seconds or so, fanfiction will inevitably skew towards lewd, no matter what fandom you're looking in. More relevant, however, is that this does not obligate an author to remove any such stories. Rather, this guideline, assuming it's been quoted accurately, merely states an intention by ffnet to police their own content, which they have clearly failed to do. As such, the onus is not on writers to refrain from posting lewd stories, but rather on ffnet to actively reject such stories.

TLDR: that passage you keep quoting doesn't mean what you think it means, buddy. If you're gonna play lawyer, you should first make sure you understand the material you're citing.
JRC1700 chapter 3 . 3/3
Nice story, I really liked it. Plus, the confrontation with the Loud sisters was pretty good. I especially enjoyed the teaser with Carol.
John Wick chapter 3 . 3/2
Lincoln Loud Is You Daddy. haha, that was hilarious. And I like what you did with setting up who has the hots for Lincoln amongs the girls that we saw. personally I'm hoping for all of the girls to fall for him but that's just me. can't wait for the sequel.
catspats31 chapter 1 . 3/2
While the writing quality of your story is good in terms of spelling and grammar, please note this part of the Content Guidelines:

"Please note FanFiction does not accept explicit content, Fiction Rating: MA, and the rating is only presented for reference."

You should remove all of the detailed descriptions of physical interaction of sexual or violent nature in this story if you want it to remain at this site, or upload it to a site where "Fiction MA" content is allowed such as AdultFanfiction.
kitehaseo chapter 3 . 3/1
Awesome story and easy to read can't wait to read the sequel. As for stuff I would like to see maybe Maggie and a few girls that don't show to often or don't have many fanfics and loudcest optional good with or without but for more content you could go for it and have the sisters help with their friends maybe thanks for the story.
Mr Perv chapter 3 . 3/1
Yay! Sequel!
I'm hoping that you'll do a time skip, like a year or two, and in that time Lincoln has become too much for Sam and Becky to handle and have started to look for other girls to keep him from putting them in endless sex comas. Sam develops a fetish because of this, watching her man doing another woman from the closet sometimes dressed as Superman.
LiteralTrash001 chapter 3 . 3/1
I would love a sequel!
Kasix-K chapter 3 . 2/29
I think the two girls that were hinted at joining in Lincoln's harem were Leni and Carol? Might have been more but those two seem like the most obvious at this point.

I enjoyed the first chapter quite a bit because it was well written smut. The second one was more smut focused then the first, as in it seemed to jump to sex faster and easier then the first. And it seemed even faster for the third.
I understand that this a smut fic, not like a long drawn out romance one and normally I wouldn't even read it because of that but your first chapter felt like less of a smut fic and more like a short romance. That feeling was kinda lost in the following two chapters.

I hope the sequel has more of that short romance feeling instead of a "porn with a plot" feeling. But ultimately it's your story and those are just my opinions, either way I'll read the sequel just to see how this all plays out.
Can't wait till the next one.
ssnoah4 chapter 3 . 2/29
Can't wait for the sequel! Question is the sequel going to have a time skip.
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