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Well that had to hurt. I look forward to more of this.

Lots of potential keep it up

this could be fun

Right, personified will of humanity. Aaaaaaand dropped.
Alaya is a system, not a god.

thought this was dead, fucking loved that btw

I'm not to sure about the 'comedic' moments that don't really fit the tone nor shirou's character, but i am willing to see where this goes

Thank you for 2nd chapter (or the first, since previous one was prologue)

Well for one it was written down in quite entertaining language, especially joke about Shirou living in vertical incline got to me. Scenes in this chapter occurred in pretty abstract locations I think (mostly moving through metaphysical spaces of several varieties, like gaps in between dimensions, Throne of Heroes, UBW), I think it's quite b*tch to visualize those clearly in eye of one's mind, but to describe it in a entertaining way that makes sense to reader is another and I praise you for that, while prologue, started pretty serious and somber about way Shirou will go down "killed by his ideal" with end having unexpected bit comical twist of his disappearance, this chapter continues with along that comical trend, of Shirou being pinballed in between cosmic entities or something (I suppose you could say guy is bit too popular for his own good)...

Anyway this chapter pretty much focuses on pushing Shirou through comical, albeit tad humiliating situations, which I suppose is somewhat fairish trade-off as he was supposed to be killed and sentenced on eternity of slaughter, but I want to ask, is this story is supposed to continue (IF next chapters will come) with formula of Shirou just being thrown all over various crazy situations from which he will go through being hurt in various humiliating ways (like throwing all over oneself thrice over) or in between zanny times he will have his moments of badassery or glory? Not that I am complaining I am just asking

Anyway thank you Woggie for this chapter, hope for next one.

Also thank you Ghostly for your efforts in convincing author.

fukin hilarious! I could just see the whole ride to kingdom come in my mind's eye...now if only someone could animate it... that would be swell.

reminded me of konosuba when kazuma gets violated by hot spring water and when he and Sylvia merged and we're blasted by megumin and yunyun's combo move...that face they made can be plastered on Shirou's in this chapter.

hoping to see more crazy shenanigans soon

Woww an update thanks to Ghostly guest! Another great chapter, thank you and yes please continue the story

YES!

Oh by the Lady(if your a Fantasy guy(I like it a lot but dam 40k/30k is like a fucking addiction!) or in the case of many others BY THE EMPEROR! We require more of this fine literature as soon as possible!

When is the next chapter?

I need it !

you piqued my interest.

Please update.