Saito can be seen as the luckiest man on earth ... until this situation is resolved and he meets Louise face to face. Uh, I would sincerely try to stay in Equestria haha, he wouldn't be abused here.

That was pretty cool, the battle with Saito, Derflinger and Tempest each working together to fight the enemy, got to tell you I could totally see that image in my mind, got flashbacks to Cap, Thor and Ironman fighting Thanos. And of course, the curse of the harem MC, nestled between two fine beauties...if only that were a common problem for the everyday person.

She would of course make due. It was what she always did. It was how she survived after being reformed. Oh sure, she could have gotten an easy job by staying with "TWILIGHT" or asking for something. She wouldn't have that. No, Tempest Shadow would find something for her own self. Which is why she ended up in a lot of odd jobs. A bodyguard was one of them, like she was now. While Equestria was a safe place with very little crime, there were always the odd set of monsters roaming the land now and again. You couldn't be too careful so she had been hired by Rarity's assistant, Sassy Saddles. Truefully, Sassy's type irritated her but she could live with it.

You called Dusk Twilight again.

Lucky bastard, where’s my buxom beauty pressing herself against me? Then again, I’m not sure I would want the responsibility of being in charge of a harem. So Saori is kind of like spider-man when it comes to attracting beautiful women, it’s his gift and his curse.

Gate anime

At the beginning of this chapter, you said Twilight would be genderbent into Dusk Shine, but in these paragraphs from the first chapter, Celestia refers to her student as Twilight.

(No, she was on her own for at least a while. Her sister was busy dealing with the dreams of Equestria and beyond. She would not burden her with her feelings. She idly thought of calling a guard to aid her, but threw that idea aside. She was no longer a princess. She sighed. She no longer had a purpose. She didn't even have to raise and lower the sun anymore and that thought… made her feel small and worthless. She'd get over it. She knew that much, but still. It did still sting a bit. She hoped she could find a way to be useful other than a confidant to "Twilight".

She didn't want "her" to rely on her guidance forever. "Twilight Sparkle" deserved to rule on "her" own hooves. With "her" own friends. The days of the Sun and Moon duo were over. A sobering fact. Now though, she had a lot of time on her hands. She laid back down. In the morning, she would look into it. She needed to be of some use. The villains in the past few years had shown her enough that she had grown weak in the centuries of peace. She needed to regain some of her past strength and usefulness.)

I never got into the MLP series like others, thought the animation and story were quite good, so this will be an interesting story for sure. I’m always impressed with the style of work and the number of stories you’re undertaking, what is this story three or four now? Anyway I look forward to see how our character fairs with his harem.
P.S.: I feel the same way with harem stories, especially Monster Musume, it would be a real shame if he was forced to only pick one.

a Foz crossover with Saito x harem? nice! :D

personally, I have never been a fan of "pseudo"-harem stories like Foz where the hero ended up leaving all the girls in his harem in the ditch.
I prefer real harems stories where the hero ends up with all the girls in his harem!
also I appreciate that you keep the harem unlike the rare stories where Saito is the Mc.

will MLP characters be humanized too?