| Reviews for Rise of the Crimson Maelstrom |
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   AlphaFlash chapter 4 . 7/24 Once again update? |
| AlphaFlash chapter 2 . 7/24 Yo will you be updating this any time soon? Cuz I really hope that you do. |
| The Tetract chapter 4 . 6/27 Not gonna lie. The first version was better. If this rewrite makes you happy, though, do you. |
| AlphaFlash chapter 1 . 6/26 Updat? And pairings? |
| Petrox chapter 4 . 6/12 so all his client will be ARA ARA women then? the shotacon |
| Dasgun chapter 4 . 5/14 .. . . . . |
| Gin of the wicked smile chapter 4 . 5/13 Will you add Suzaku Himejima in this story? |
| The Edible Scump chapter 1 . 5/3 Nice start. I like the choices for pairings. |
| igorxp chapter 4 . 4/17 I'm Brazilian, and I ask please! Could it be that it doesn't take long for him to have the pairs? (You could build the loving relationship between them later). And wouldn't it be more interesting for Ahri to be the queen? She is a 9-tailed kitsune (the fact that she is already a 9-tailed kitsune hidden by Amaterasu would be interesting). And I think Riara's choice for the 8 pawns is perfect (they will finally use this character) PS: It doesn't change the harem. |
| Lorien Legacy chapter 4 . 4/10 great story please continue soon |
| PraetorXyn chapter 4 . 4/6 Honestly your Amaterasu reminds me of her depiction from Ouroboros Dragon Emperor, where she makes Naruto call her "Ama-nee-chan" and us constantly fussing over Issei and smothering him in her brreasts. I like the story so far, it's the harem that I like the least. I mean, you're writing in a universe with the most beautiful women in all of light novels / anime; you could ignore Rias' and Sona's peerage entirely and still have loads of them to choose from, and you're bringing in a bunch of crossover characters. The SAO one isn't even in the same league as the rest of them either. I also find the number too small for plot reasons)since he's going to have a peerage of like 5-6 people against peerages of up to 16... just seems like it's going to limit battles a lot or result in the enemies looking like fodder or plot armor shenanigans. Not that I mind Naruto and his peerage being super OP - I would actually prefer that, just not in the way where it doesn't make sense or is boring (like Dojutsu spam). |
| Primarx chapter 4 . 4/2 looking forward for more. good job) |
| Genesis09 chapter 3 . 4/2 My only issue with this chapter is that the way you wrote it the finalists are expected to beat 3 high class devils to be promoted. That is extremely unlikely, I woulda thought they’d simply do their best and then be judged by their high class opponents. But that’s just my thoughts. Still enjoying the story. -Genesis09 |
| Anti-weeaboo Faction chapter 4 . 4/1 Lemme guess... Amaterasu? |
| biob1 chapter 4 . 4/1 Great work |
