Really good keep it up. Please update soon

I'm pretty sure deku should have been able to beat the Zero pointer as Way Big without using OFA, but overall good chapter

Nice work I look forward to more

Jesus the omnitrix is broken enough without all these hacks you gave him.

this fanfic is fucking awful

I can't wait for the next chapters, I can already tell this is gonna be great. :)

What's the story about? You should put that in your description instead of the circumstances about your publishing. Save that for author's notes. I have no intention of reading your story til you fix this.

Hey man I love the Story on Wattpad